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I speak Tagalog and English. I am studying Italian and Japanese.
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    Extra virgin olive oil

    My family cultivates olive trees from centuries. When my father died, five years ago, I and my brother had to take a decision. We could sell our farm or we could continue this family tradition. We knew that we should take an extra work and some problems and we were sure that we wouldn't earn money. We dedided to take in charge the farm why my father had two employees and we didn't want to fire them.
    Now we produce three thousands liters of an excellent oilve oil. We won some prizes for its quality and now we have to enlarge our client's net. We sell directly our oil and our clients often give us a lot of compliments. We still don't earn money but our two employees still work with us and that's is very good.


    My family cultivates olive trees from centuries. When my father died, five years ago, I and my brother had to <s>take</s> make a decision. We could sell our farm or we could continue this family tradition. *[We knew that we should take an extra work and some problems] and we were sure that we wouldn't earn money. We decided to take <s>in</s> charge of the farm <s>why</s> because my father had two employees and we didn't want to fire them. 
    Now we produce three thousand<s>s</s> liters of <s>an</s> excellent olive oil. We
    have won some prizes for its quality and now we have to enlarge our client's net. We sell directly our oil and our clients often give us a lot of compliments. We still don't earn money but our two employees still work with us and that<s>'s</s> is very good.<o:p></o:p>

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    Salve, Federico.  Thank you for correcting my notebook entry.  I am encouraged to write more.  Perhaps I will write another one tomorrow.  I would like to return the favor and help with your notebook entry.  I made some adjustments J However, I am not sure what you want to say with this part:  *[We knew that we should take an extra work and some problems] so I left it as is.  :)

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    February 11, 2011
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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself Buona sera. Sono Ulan. Sono filippina. Abito a Manila. Studio l'italiano e la lingua giapponese ogni sabato. Ho trentasette anni. Lavoro nella televisione. Sono la produttrice. :)
    February 8, 2011
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