An English writing practice
The following English paragraph was written by an English beginner. Are these English sentences correct and native? Thanks in advance.
"Country life is very peaceful comparison with city life, the environment is green and attractive in there. the air is fresher and is not being pollution, There is not so much pressure in life, what’s more I could eat home grown products vegetables."
Country life is very peaceful IN comparison TO city life. THE environment THERE is green and attractive, the air is fresher WITHOUT pollution. There is LESS pressure in life, AND I CAN eat home grown vegetables.