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help me please In the picture, an American girl wearing traditional Chinese costume is smiling sweetly . The hat is ornamented with jewelry. And ear rings look incredible, which contribute to the nice appearance of her. It's clear that the girl was satisfied with her new look. This photo demonstrates the acceptance Of the foreigners to Chinese traditional culture. Ever since economic globalization going on around the world. Our culture has been gradually familiar to the foreigner whose fondness and enthusiasm furthermore accelerate the wide spread of the culture. Their amazement reflects the fact that proud should be our attitude toward traditional culture. Amazed by Chinese culture. They surprisingly found that the mysterious country used to be described as poor and evil is actually a country of high civilization and long history. A case in point is an American girl in custom of the minority, which also appeared to be a symbol to promote traditional Chinese culture. Above all, enough significance should be attention towards our traditional culture. We should develop our culture to be more fascinating and cultivated in a more luminous way to the students influence power of culture is of tremendous value to the confidence of the country. That's where the meaning of education and characteristic culture lies. As a student , awareness of study and develop Our Culture is the destination of our life pursuit. Only then will we be a man tto achieve the great rejuvenation of our country.

it' a picture composition to an American girl in traditional Chinese clothes In the picture, an American girl wearing traditional Chinese costume is smiling sweetly . The hat is ornamented with jewelry. And ear rings look incredible, which contribute to the nice appearance of her. It's clear that the girl was satisfied with her new look. This photo demonstrates the acceptance Of the foreigners to Chinese traditional culture. Ever since economic globalization going on around the world. Our culture has been gradually familiar to the foreigner whose fondness and enthusiasm furthermore accelerate the wide spread of the culture. Their amazement reflects the fact that proud should be our attitude toward traditional culture. Amazed by Chinese culture. They surprisingly found that the mysterious country used to be described as poor and evil is actually a country of high civilization and long history. A case in point is an American girl in custom of the minority, which also appeared to be a symbol to promote traditional Chinese culture. Above all, enough significance should be attention towards our traditional culture. We should develop our culture to be more fascinating and cultivated in a more luminous way to the students influence power of culture is of tremendous value to the confidence of the country. That's where the meaning of education and characteristic culture lies. As a student , awareness of study and develop Our Culture is the destination of our life pursuit. Only then will we be a man tto achieve the great rejuvenation of our country.