I really need more good sentences to be added to my statement because a friend of mine applied the last year and he failed and when asking about the reason for not accepting him was told that the statement is not strong enough they took the statement in consideration only, nothing else. please help me because I really do have a strong desire of study.

I wrote this and I'll be grateful if somebody help me by adding some good writing and information this is my statement: When I decided to take English Language for first year, I did not realize that it would soon become an obsession of mine; I have found myself analyzing the informative posters, advertisements and even conversations I hear. It attracts me to discover more about language as it is a subject that defines us as people. The human mind is so intricate, and it is interesting to discover how our language is shaped by the way we think and comprehend the world. Therefore, I feel that the study of language will give me the skills I need to further understand human nature. Higher education, I believe, will be the perfect way to study this, and I look forward to the available chances to me to learn more about my career in more depth. Whilst studying English Language at the first year , I have become particularly interested in the study of language in common contexts "The Stuff of Thought: Language as a gate into Human Nature." This is a topic I have a particular interest for . The Critical Thinking has helped me to develop my analytical skills, and it has been very useful in conjunction with my other Level subjects because it has given me precious lessons in creating levelled arguments and considering evidence. As phonetics gave me the opportunity to learn more about the human body; something that I have always found to be important whilst studying language. Outside of college, I enjoy reading a lot, especially short stories ; again, this has helped me to realize my passion for language. It is such a powerful moderate to communicate ideas and feelings. My interest in educational films has given me the idea of a career in media or teaching, and I believe that a degree in English Language and Linguistics will give me a thorough knowledge of the power that language holds.

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