You could either add the word "and" following the comma or replace it with a full stop. So it would be "My name is Kristina, and I was born..." OR "My name is Kristina. I was born...". When saying the date it is common to add "of" but this is never written. The correct version would be "7th July, 1990..." If you want to take the American approach then you would just swap the day and month around.

About me and my work.

About me and my work.

I'm Andrei (in English my name translates as Andrew). I'm from Ukraine and my home is in Simferopol. It's in the Crimea.
I'm in the IT business. I work as a software developer in small but very good company. I'm in charge of finding new solutions to...?, research and testing new technology for futher integration with other projects, discussing the software architecure, and implementing all customer requirements with help writing code. :) (I think there are a lot of mistakes in the pervious (previous) sentence:))
Our customers are from different countries including Europian (European) countries such as Ukraine, Russia (how are you defining European?), and countries outside of Europe, such as Indonesia. My company works in sphere high-load web oriented systems, banking and government information systems. Now I'm working on a big and interesting project. I like my work and my profession and I'm happy that I'm working in this company.

But enough about work. Let me tell you something about myself. :)

I'm crazy about computers and new technology, like any typical programmer/geek. I'm always interested in everything new. A lot of the new information in the IT-world is written in English so I'm also interested in learning English.
I'm also keen on sports and cooking (and then eating:)) So my body is always in good condition. My hobbies are bike riding, hiking, sometimes photo digital processing or drawing, and writing small poems. Recently, I bought a guitar. So now I'm learning to play it.

Oh, and I have a cat. My cat's name is Shift :) It's not a joke:) I will write about my cat in another post.

Thank you for reading.

If you are talking about a specific group (of artists) then you use "the". Artists on its own is very general.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Zhangjie . I am a greed in English (I am not sure what you're trying to say here - that you like English?). I am bad in English exam often I often do badly in English exams. I never receive any help . Please help me . I hate my classmates because they often laugh at me .I am so fed up. I don't wanna (want to is better here - wanna is very informal) laugh. (space)I am not silly . I want do anything what can raise my English . I will do anything to improve my English.
I never a friend to talk with who don't laugh at me. I do not have any friends with whom I can practise and who won't laugh at me. I feel very lonely.

* When you put a full stop at the end of a sentence it comes immediately after the word. There is no need to put a space before it.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I like English and German.)/ I learn english (no comma) because it's considered an international language. It's very interesting to know something about another country, its people and traditions. It's also good (cool) to be able to understand foreign songs.=)

Please check my journal about my trip to Fussen,Germany!!

I visited in Fussen at for the first time on this day two years ago.
Fussen is very famouse for its castle, which is called Neuschwanstein castle (full stop) and I had wanted to visit this castle at least once for a long time in my life time.
I flew over the local city in Bayerun,Germany, from Pisa, (space) Italy, in the early morning. I overlooked below at the snowry (snowy) scenery. I thought we must be flying above the Alps mountains. And I guessed that it would snow in Fussen.
It was my first visit to Germany itself. As I didn`t bring any guidebook of Germany (space and delete the comma) I had no travel information. (use a comma instead) but I managed to get reach Fussen by bus and train.

As soon as I finished checking in to the hotel, which was nearby the station, (space) I went ahead to a Neuschwanstein castle. The place is very near not far from the staion by bus. I saw many tourits around there.

There are two big famous castles here, a Neuschwanstein castle and a Hohenberg castle. First, (space) I visited a Hoenburug castle. It commands has a beautiful view of a Neuschwanstein castle. How magnificant!

And As I walked up on the road for to reach the other castle while it began to become get dark and there was a fine scattering of snow.

I found we could get to the castle by a horse car. horse and carriage (is this what you mean?)

(My little sister used also trvalled this way when she went visited there with her husband this year.)

I coudn`t see inside selfish (this sentence is unclear - do you mean that you could not see inside the castle and you thought this was selfish?). The time was decided in advance and a woman stuff female member of staff guided me inside as part of a group.

It became a little darker when I went outside left the castle.
I went down the road, (space) thinking about what I would eat alone in that night.
It's a good memory.

 

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I hope this helps.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Because of the need to enhance their own (what? you need to say something else here, like "to enhance their own opportunities), English is the most popular language (full stop), (new sentence) It is necessary in order to better adapt to the society (whose society? Presumably not China's. Do you mean it is necessary if you want to work internationally or something like that?)

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Cherry, and but you also can call me Pie,. I live in Xi'an, which is an ancient city in (space) China .

 

Punctuation always comes after the word - there is no space between the word and a comma, for example. Also, names always begin with a capital letter, as do the names of places and countries.

P.S. I met a girl from China who also called herself Cherry Pie. What a weird coincidence ^^