昨天我买了两个书,我很喜欢去图书点找新书来读
昨天我买了两本书,我很喜欢去图书点找新书来读。
'本‘ is used to describe the number of books, notebooks, journals......
By the way, e-book can also use '本'.
其实我发现大部分人<s style="background-color: rgb(102, 163, 224);">说他们</s>喜欢的书,其中有些对我来说不是很受用,但还是可以教我<s style="background-color: rgb(102, 163, 224);">们</s>一些新事物,特别是自助书。
'受用' : you enjoy it ; beneficial
'事物' has broader meaning than '事情'
<s style="background-color: rgb(102, 163, 224);">我就准备了我的背包,</s>明天看起来会下雨,而且天气会很冷,所以我<s style="background-color: rgb(102, 163, 224);">已经拿雨伞和厚夹克放</s>在背包里面备好了雨伞和厚夹克。上个月我学了关于广州的很多东西。
'在背包里面备好了雨伞和厚夹克' means that you have your bag packed with things you need in it. And you will go somewhere with your bag tomorrow.
'学/学习' is a transitive verb as in English.
我不知道<s style="background-color: rgb(102, 163, 224);">住在</s>广州大部分人会说广东话而且不同地方的广东话也会不一样,这真的很有趣。
I guess you mean that people speak in different tones or with different use of words and prases if they come from different places in Guangdong province? It will be better to put it another way: 'Cantonese varies sightly in different places of Guangdong province.'
The subject of this part '真的很有趣' has changed, so it can not be left out.
其实这样让我觉得,甚至会说中文,但很多中国人会有他们特别的<s style="background-color: rgb(102, 163, 224);">语言或</s>方言,所以我想要继续学习世界上所有不同的语言。
It is not clear on the part shadowed in purple. What do you think? You can rewrite this part in English.
Modifier is supposed to be in front of the noun.