这样对吗? 它是我的最后的考试..
大家好！我的名字
<strike>是</strike>（叫）王哲，
<strike>我</strike>今年二十岁。我学了两年中文，我喜欢它。
<strike>我</strike>在未来的一年（里，）会去中国，因为我想学习中文。
<strike>我的</strike> （我）一些来自上海的朋友向我介绍了首歌曲， 它叫爱情好无奈。我非常喜欢这首歌，希望你也喜欢。如果你想知道
<strike>刚铎</strike>（更多）中国歌手（，）你可以问我。谢谢你们！
<strike>秦</strike>（请）享受这首歌。
Hello everybody! My name is Zhe, I am twenty years old. I have studied Chinese for two years, and I like it. I will go to China next year, because I want to learn Chinese. Some of my friends from Shanghai, introduced this song to me, it is called “love a good frustration”. I really like this song, hope you like it too. If you want to know good Chinese singers you can ask me. Thank you! Please enjoy this song.
This is my final exam for chinese...is it right? Thanks
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