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I made an essay, if someone could correct me would be aweome, i know its long but if you point out some mistakes i will be so pleased. It’s well known that childhood is one of the most crucial stage of development on human’s been life, in fact some studies support the idea that from bith to five years old is when a person build the basis of his personality, including aspects as creativity, lidership and even tendency to psychological depression. This is why a incredible amount of people arguing about what is better if a boarding school or a traditional one. People who preffer boarding school often are young parents, this type of schools allowed them feeling relax and save time in his daily rutine, they also argue about the quality of time that they can spend during weekends with his kids, seems to be obvius the relief that boardings school provide to them. In the other hand the parents who support tradictional schoolds usually are older and lives in little cities. They do not want to let some strage cares about raising his own child. In addition, this kind of parents are reluctant to throw away a huge amount of money on a school by doing something about they consider their own duties. As a conclusion it appear that both sides have something in common, they want to raise their childrens as good as posible. However, these paths are drastically diferent and seems neither of two sides are totally correct. If we are requier to choose one, we need to be aware about all aspects that could affect to children’s development at the end this matter most. #correctme #IELTS #Englishlearning #essay