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Hi, I'm Rika. Am looking for a person who can exchange languages. I studied English for one year in England. I would like to improve my English. If you want to learn Japanese, please tell me. I've got a account of Facebook. Skype also.
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    Firing Range と　Priest

    - 昨日Firing Range に行った。
    （I went to the Firing Range yesterday.)
    - 銃でうちまくって楽しかったです。（笑）
    - Firing Range<strike>で</strike>はとってもうるさかった。
    (It was very noisy at the Firing Range.)

    -- その後、Priestを見る<strike>こと</strike>ために映画館に行った。
    (After that, we went to the theatre to watch Priest.)

    - Priest はすごくつまらない映画だった。Priestの話はいい話だ、けどスローペース映画だった。
    (Priest was a very boring movie. Although the story was good, it was a very slow paced movie.)
    Priestはすごくつまらない映画だった。その話自体はいいけど、スローペースな映画だった。sounds more natural. Your sentence is correct.

    - 昨日友達と飲みまくったので二日酔いで頭が痛いです。

    - とにかく、昨日はいい一日になりました.
    (Anyway, it turned out to be a pretty good day.) (Do I really need 「昨日は」in that sentence?)

    間違いを直してもらえると　嬉しいです、　よろしくお願いします

    マニ

    ～まくった　sounds really natural and a colloquial word, I guess ... Hahaha...
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    May 15, 2011
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    April 17, 2011
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    April 11, 2011
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    They are grammatically nothing wrong but we say neither of them in coversation. we usually omit subjects in informal conversation. Like if someone asked me 寒い？I would say 寒い。 私は寒いです。: ～は…です。It emphasizes　…. When you want to put stress on 寒い you can say 　　　　　　　　　　　私は寒いです。 私が寒いです。：～が…です。it emphasizes ～. When you want to put stress on 私 you can say 私が寒いです。For example, if you were with many people, one of them asked you all if you feel cold. only you felt cold, then you could say 私が寒いです。 makes sense? If you don't understand let me know. I'll give another example.
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    April 11, 2011
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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself My hobbies are riding motor bikes and travelling.
    November 14, 2010
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