Hello! My name is Mayu. I live in Tokyo in Japan. I'm learning English and German.
I like to speak English, but I'm not good at writing. So I want to practise my writing skill.
It's better to say "So, I want to improve my writing."
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Everything is possible if we work hard.we should have our dream.I have a dream that one we can study in the same college.
Anything is possible if we work hard. We should have <strike>our</strike> dreams. I have a dream that one day we can study at the same college.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I'm Gleice and I am learningEnglish because I like language and I like to meet new people.
When you are doing something at this moment you need to use the present continues.
I (subject) am ('to be') learning (verb+ing) English (object).
