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    Blog #1

    <s>I will keep here track of books I have read and things I have done.</s>
    I am keeping track of books I have read and things I have done.

    I recently finished a great audio book:
    "Effortless English: Learn to Speak English Like a Native" by A.J.Hoge.
    I love to read<s> English</s> books on how to learn English.
    A.J. is an amazing person, and very passionate. The book and it's ideas are well-written. <s>is well written and all ideas are looking very good </s>. You can download it for free from his <s>Internet</s> site.
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    April 11, 2020
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    Collaboration between science and business to save the ocean

    On one hand our ocean provides <s>to</s> the human populations with an <s>importante</s> important quantity of valuable food (like fish and shellfish). On the other hand seafood is an important business for some powerful companies. But now our ocean is in danger because <s>theses</s> these companies want to make<s> too much too fast money</s> too much money too fast from marine ecosystems. Overfishing and unsustainable fish farming threaten the health of the ocean and the creatures in it. If <s>theses compagnies</s> these companies don't work in a responsible way, the environment will suffer and seafood stocks could run out. Worse, the whole Earth could be impacted because the ocean is a key link <s>of the</s> to life.
    Some scientists collected and analyzed data about seafood companies over a period of 2 years. They identified the biggest seafood <s>compagnies</s> companies which caught and sold the most of <s>the</s> fish in the World. Then they met with the CEOs of <s>theses compagnies</s> these companies to share <s>theirs</s> their scientific knowledge about how to interact with the ocean in a sustainable way.
    Scientists and business people decided to work together to find some sustainable business plans in the long term.
    Eventually the companies created and signed the "Seafood Business for Ocean Stewardship" agreement.
    The agreement objectives are :
    -<s>Stopping</s> To stop illegal fishing,
    -<s>Ending</s> To end forced labour of seafood workers,
    -<s>Reducing</s> To reduce the use of antibiotics in seafood production.
    This case of a successful science-business partnership shows that this is <s>it's</s> a good way to reduce human activities on the planet. This method gives quicker and <s>larger</s> better results than the environmental policies created by <s>the govements</s><s style="color: rgb(0, 138, 0);"> </s><s>of each</s><s style="color: rgb(0, 138, 0);"> </s><s>countries</s>. other countries' governments.
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    August 27, 2019
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    Children. Please correct my text

    CHILDREN'S MARKETING
    <s>In age up to 8 years children</s> Children up to the age of eight trust information in advertisement easily and completely. The thing is - to obtain their attention! 🤡 After that they will do everything (with parents) to make their wishes come true 😭🤗🤒😈
    There are a few facts about how to do an advertising message <s>more prominent and</s> that is more attractive for children:
    Their loyalty is triggered by a character, rather than by a product - YOU SHOULD ALWAYS USE A HERO 🦁 🧚🦸,
    For children under 8 years old <s>more attractive are cartoons heroes, </s> cartoon heroes are more attractive.
    After the age of 8 they react better to other real boys and girls at the same age or 2-3 years <s>elder</s> older (you know, each kid would like to look <s>elder</s> older😏)
    Children enjoy seeing SMILES: the more <s>emotions of</s> joy they see <s>on</s> in a picture, the stronger <s>is their</s> their wish is to see it again 😉, (you could also say: the more joy they see in a picture, the more they want to see it again.)
    Children prefer BRIGHT COLOURS! They love red, because <s>it associates</s> it is associated with activities and movement.
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    August 27, 2019
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    Pensamientos Mi esposo es un operador de máquinas. El trabajo paga bien pero quiere un trabajo nuevo porque el trabajo es duro para su cuerpo. Quiere a ir a la escuela a soldar. Soy una ama de casa en este momento, pero estoy estudiando estudios legales y justicia penal en universidad. Quiero ser una abogada después asisto escuela de derecho. Hoy mi esposo y yo pintamos nuestra casa. Pintamos los parades blanco. Es un color aburrido, pero no teníamos una elección de que color pintar nuestra apartamento. Esperamos comprar nuestra casa primera en el próximo dos años. Queremos una casa con una yarda, y esté es en un buen barrio. Preferiblemente, queremos vivir muy lejos de este estado, quizás en el oeste de los estados unidos. Nuestra familia es muy lejos de ahí, pero hay más oportunidades ahí para nosotros. Quiero mi hija tener la vida mejor ella puede y vivir mejor que sus padres vivieron.
    August 26, 2019
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    Education for Whole Life

    In the past, people thought that education was only for young people. Now it is <s>believed</s> known that education is <s>for a person’s whole life</s>.important for all ages. In the past, a person who could not read was thought to be <s>an illiteracy</s>. illiterate. Now a person who <s>can not learn</s> is not learning is thought to be <s>an illiteracy.</s>illiterate. The world changes every day. You may do a job that <s>could not be heard</s> was unheard of ten years ago. For example, a person posting his videos on the internet can earn <s>a big</s> a lot of money. It’s <s>the truth now</s> true that you could not <s>image</s> imagine this ten years before. If you want to do this job, you have to learn how to make a video and post it on the internet <s>by</s> with smart phones. Well, you could not learn that at a school ten years ago, because smart phones were not invented <s>at that time.</s> yet. Working as a Taxi driver is a <s>normal job recently</s> common today, and many people <s>take</s> use it as a full time job. However, <s>can you image that it would be</s> could you imagine if it disappeared in ten years? AI is the technology <s>mostly</s> most talked about recently and it <s>would</s> could replace <s>driver’s job</s> drivers' jobs in ten years. Drivers replaced by AI have to learn some new skills to find a new job. So every one <s>have</s> has to realize that education <s>is for</s> can change a person’s whole life.

    I changed the sentence "Now it is believed that education is for a person's whole life" to "Now it is known that education is important for all ages", following the topic of your entry.

    Another way to convey this would be to say "Now it is known that education can change a person's whole life", which is how I edited the last sentence of your entry. Either one would work, and depends on whether you intend to emphasize the general importance of education past primary education, or that this education defines your possible career.
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    August 26, 2019
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    If I won the lottery, I would travel all over the world. (This looks good!)

    If I had some superpower I'd like to teleport
    If I could have any superpower, it would be teleportation.

    If I could go back in time, I'd probably do some things that I didn't <s>do out of fears</s>. due to fear.

    But I wouldn't change the things and actions that I actually<s> took. </s> did.

    If I had to choose one place to spend the rest of my life, I would go crazy because I want to <s>know</s> see a lot of different places in this beautiful world
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    August 26, 2019
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    What do you do for work?

    I <s>will</s> start a new job<s>, performance marketer from tomorrow.</s> as a performance marketer tomorrow. I am very excited and nervous.
    I <s>choose</s> <s>the</s> chose this job <s>becuase</s> because it is a trendy job. The world has changed so fast. This job <s>was</s> did not exist before, but many <s>companys</s> companies need it nowadays. I can get <s>opportunity</s> opportunities easily with this <s>work</s>. job
    I also can work anywhere with a laptop. 3 years ago, I was <s>a</s> an event planner. I always had to work at the office or at an event venue. This company that I will work for has a rule of working <s>just</s> only twice <s>in</s> a week at the office. That is a really big advantage for me.
    I hope I work very well in the new field.
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    August 26, 2019
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    position transfer

    The reason <s>of</s> why I want to seize <s>the</s> (this) opportunity is because I want to go <s>deep</s> (deeper) into Google ads advertising and <s>improving</s> (improve) constantly. In addition, <s>the</s> (these) new job duties are related to what I learned in college.
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    August 26, 2019
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