please please help me !!~~~~ Someone can correct my letter below? Thank you very much!! Dear Sir/Madam: I am writing to inquire about a detail of national students' application. Currently I am trying to apply for my graduate degree. I wonder if I miss the priority deadline of this University, can I still have the chance to continue my application? I would be most grateful if you could send me the above information at your earliest convenience. Thank you so much!

my favorite restaurant I would like to talk about my favorite restaurant near my work place. There are a lot of restaurants near my work place Chongwenmen in the centre of Beijing.Since this area is one of the most important bussiness parts in this city, generally foods here are more expensive comparing to the price in other places. Eeven a little bowl of soup made by some water and a cabage leaf costs more than 7yuan.So actualy, I dont love any of them. However, we can still choose a talleast one from dwarves.hehe. My favorite restaurant's name is The spicy spirit of which location near Chongwenmen Subway station. Foods there are very delicious, of course, expensive too. The main flavor of their food is "spicy and numb" like most Sichuan or Chongqing food.And they make the food very delicately. For example, the steaks are small, and half meat half bone, every piece look the same size, when you see it, you know they are chosen carefully. Oh, it is really tasty, by the way, they have different types of steaks, I love the one made with sugar and vinigar,although it is not spicy at all. My friend loves the spicy snails there, but I dont know, because I am afraid of such things.I just eat regular foods,haha!

to some degree, Chinese is more"open minded" my boyfriend is American, we oftern talk about the culture shock between China and the western countries. One day, we talked about the regions on our dinner with a lot of foreigners. He told me, some Americans call black people raised in the US oreo, because they have black skin outside but white heart inside. Also, they call Asian people raised in the USA like my boyfriend banana. I said,so you will call white people who live in China eggs?haha. he said yes! I think it is very funny. But my boyfriend said it is not so funny, actully, it is rude when you say it in the USA. many people are sensitive on this topic. I think no Chinese think it is rude until some one tell us. Generally, western people are considered more polite or socialble in the world, but I think it is just because they have different histories. Compared to Western people, Chinese seem to be more open minded on the topic of pravicy or religion or region..and we show our respect to western people, but to tell the truth, I think most Chinese dont really understand why they are rude. Can I think in this way :to some degree, we look more conversave, but we are actully more open minded? no bias, just my thoughts.hopefully I havent hurt anyone here.