When I am lonely
<s>Different from other people</s> Unlike many people, I seldom feel lonely, because I like to be alone. However, everything has an exception. Because my school was far away from my home, (or, "Owing to the long distance from home to school,") I needed/had to spend a lot of time <s>on </s>commuting, and didn't have any friends or classmates to do so with. When I <s>setting</s> sit on the bus and look<s>ing</s> out of the window I feel lonely, but I don't hate this feeling. <s>actually</s> In fact, I like it.
When I am lonely, I will read novels. <s>addicted to</s> Immersing in the worlds of the novels can make me forget the feeling and make me happy. In addition to reading, I also do some exercise like biking or swimming. Both of them <s>are useful</s> help to <s>transform</s> improve my mood.
Nevertheless, I think the most important thing is to learn how to face <s>lonely</s> loneliness and to try to<s> learn how to</s> get along with it.
Nice piece of writing! I love spending time alone with my books too, it's such a therapeutic activity.
Keep up the good work! :-)