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    My house

    I have been living in a small apartment for 9 months. My family moved into this house last January. This building is painted white and orange colors and inscribed ‘정원주택’, the name of the building.
    To get to my apartment, you go from the entrance up to the 3rd floor and ring the door bell. In no time you'll see my complete kitchen with dishes, pots and pans for cooking and a small table and chairs to sit at and eat. Right next to the refrigerator, there is a spacious room for my parents. I used to [Are you sure you mean "used to" and not "sometimes"? "Used to" implies only in the past.] spend time there to watch the 50 inch T.V. with Netflix<s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">,</s> and high-speed internet. And l have my own room on the opposite side of my parents’ room. This cozy, clean, compact room is my favorite place to relax after a long day. My room is fully equipped with a bed, desk, chair, wardrobe and so on. Right next to the bed, there is a huge window which allows in so much sunshine and never lets me oversleep. So overall this is what my place looks like.
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    August 15, 2019
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    024_1908　Could you help me by correcting the text below?【Happy O-bon】

    It's currently O-bon holiday in Japan<s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);"> </s>.
    (O-bon is a traditional summer event to honor our ancestors.)

    I went to a concert by my fa<s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">r</s>vorite band "Monky Majik" during this holiday.
    It was very fun as usual. Canadian members (they are brothers) said "Happy O-bon!" to the MC. It’s a very impressive expression for me. We Japanese don't say it, but "Happy O-bon" is really funny and so good. I loved this phrase! :)

    They always entertain us at every concert by using two languages, English and Japanese, smoothly. I think that was an amazing thing. Next year will be the 20th anniversary for them, so I’m thinking now about what kind of concerts they will plan.
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    August 14, 2019
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    Transport usage in the UK

    The three pie charts give information about the shares of four types of transportation used in Britain in 1965, 1985 and 2005.

    Overall, it is noticeable that private cars accounted for a vast majority of vehicles used and its proportion shows an upward trend in these three years. By contrast, the use of recreational vehicles remained at a low percentage in the three years.

    Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that private cars accounted for 40%, 55% and 60% in these three years. Meanwhile, the proportion of lorries & other commercial vehicles and public transport kept a similar percentage (at about 20%) in 1965 and 1985. However, when it came to 2005, the proportion of lorries & other commercial vehicles used declined to only 10%, while public transport used was still at nearly 20%. Besides, recreational cars account for a low percentage in these three years, with 15% in the first year, and then dropped sharply to only 5% in the second year, and finally increased slightly to 8% in the third year.

    Very well done overall! Only a few mistakes.
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    August 14, 2019
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    Hello, I am Stepan

    Hello, I love English because of its community and content. Why do you love this language which you are studying?
    My Skype: putnik5142 . I'm looking for people who speak English. I can teach you Russian. We would hear two different accents, which is useful for studying language<s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);"> </s>.
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    August 13, 2019
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    Making sentences

    The board has decided to downsize the company.
    Please check the modified ["updated" would be a more common word choice, but "modified" is okay] report.
    I ran into Nick at the supermarket.
    It's an impressive answer that stands out from the rest of the answers.
    It's a<s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">n</s> mediocre performance; I don't think he will pass the appraisal.
    He missed out on the opportunity to study in London.
    It's a compelling example.
    You should mention the key highlight of your career that you were most proud of<s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);"> </s>. [it's a little redundant to say both "the key highlight" and "that you were most proud of"; you could say "a key highlight", or just "the highlight"]
    Overusing your phone is bad for your eyes.
    The number of German learners has [the subject here is "the number" (of German learners), not "German learners"] overtaken that of French learners.
    His responsibility is overseeing the company's operation.
    Don't be afraid to brag about yourself in a job interview.
    We are ["have been" would be more typical, but "are" is okay] successful in accomplishing our goals.
    A helpful trick is to take some crash courses.
    He has a natural tendency to ramble.
    Nick has an extensive background in storytelling.
    He is passionate about helping women who have trouble finding a job.
    It's worth pointing out that the sales in July had peaked.
    The number is significantly higher than the annual median income of 69,000 dollars that most households bring in.
    Walking straight down the hallway, then turning right, you will see the office opposite<s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">s</s> the foyer.
    [You can also write: "Walk straight down the hallway, then turn right, and you will see the office opposite the foyer." Then it becomes a command rather than an assertion.]
    It will be a challenge to get into the yard, as there is a high barrier.
    These <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">annoying</s> [redundant] questions annoyed me.
    Thank you for your warm hospitality.
    He likes entertaining his business associates at home.
    Smoking is highly addictive and it will shorten life.
    He likes jogging and going backpacking.
    Companies who neglect customers' complaints will lose customers.
    The company's rules clearly specify that staff will get fired if they receive wr<s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">r</s>itten war<s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">i</s>ning more than 5 times.
    The old packaging design will phase out within six months.
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    August 13, 2019
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    August 13, 2019
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    My cat

    I once took a stray cat home from the street. She was so cranky in the beginning and not very fond of petting. Every time I got closer to her, she hissed and tried to scratch me. As time passed, she began to realize that I wouldn't hurt her, <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">she</s> lowered her guard and became more docile. I feel like we are totally capable of changing the way animals get along with us bit by bit, but trust can't be built overnight.
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    August 11, 2019
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    Child-Friendly Community

    In China，many children are looked after by their grandparents，as both parents work in most families. Thus，the design of a child-friendly community should consider senior-friendly spaces as well.
    Child-friendly paths between community and public urban recreation spaces are a good choice to ensure children‘s travel rights. It is also important to improve the space along the school route，making it interesting for people to walk slowly.
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    August 11, 2019
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    A fairy tale about cats and rainbows (excerpt)

    The streams of rain kept falling down and down. The cat (whose name is Gray) and his good friend the dog (called Dot) sat still by the terrace door and looked out through the window. <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">The </s>Gray yawned wide and stretched out. There wasn't much to see. The colours were fuzzy, and even shapes of the objects standing close by were almost indistinguishable.

    Such a sleepy mood prevailed for quite a long time. They would have preferred to run in the courtyard and play, but they were so bored at home. Nearby, there was a cat called Mruczek was lying down. This cat didn't do a whole lot, but despite that he never seemed too bored. This time too - his eyes were wide open, and he stared at the window continuously...

    "What are you observing? There is so much rain that the world is not visible," the Gray asked, curious.

    Source: https://bajki-zasypianki.pl/bajki-o-kotkach/
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    August 11, 2019
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    The importance of information technology in education

    Technology has been advancing a lot in the past few years. Years ago we didn´t use computers to do all our work, however, now we can´t work without them.

    I think that years ago at school<s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">s</s> people used more paper, for example to draw metal pieces at the technical career [unclear what you're saying here; do you mean "to design metal objects for technical applications"?]. Nowadays people use <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">the</s> computers more often to do such drawings.

    The use of technology at work helps people to do <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">the</s> tasks quicker and more easily. People who live<s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">s</s> far away are connected through video calling, text messages, and so on…

    On the other hand, it is easy to get accustomed to using only <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">the</s> mobile phones to communicate with other people and lose the ability to speak face to face.

    For me now, it is impossible live without technology because I use it for everything, from working to speaking with my friends to hanging out.
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    August 9, 2019
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