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- problems in big cities Something unreasonable shown up these years. Metropolises, which are the signs of civilization, give their dwellers a deteriorating environment of living. Pollutions, high-level pressure and so on became usual. These causes the problem of public health. The overcrowding people in big cities should be the deeper reason. Citizens in 18BC can hardly image why rubbishes from daily life make up of seriously pollutions. They also cannot feel the hardship of asking for cure we meet nowadays, too. To solve these problems, we need help from both the government and our citizens. For government, policies work in reduce fertility can be made. Doing with request of convenient treatment, more hospital should be built, and more doctors should be trained. In the same time, social education in healthy part must be developed. As citizens, we have to cooperate with government’s activities. For example, turn our life style into a healthier one is a good choice. People with high social responsibility are models where we can learn how to be useful in the war fight with pejorative environment caused by overpopulation. Many new trends show ways to protect the prosperity. Such as researching on environmentally friendly resource. Oil and gas keep our society run, but pollutions from flame threaten people’s health. Building Satellite cities and developing urban-rural fringe areas mean people are trying to solve public health problem by ruling the edge of cities again. If these actions work, happiness of living in metropolises will back to our minds, while a new beautiful world can be seen at tomorrow.August 6, 201930
- 对我来说(可改为“在我看来”(in my opinion),对我来说相当于“as for me”,和之后谈到的“我们”“顾客”不匹配),竞争一定(删去一定。这其实是语言习惯的问题,一定的肯定意义太强,相当于must,中文使用一般比较委婉)有很多好处。第一,竞争气氛让我们工作得更努力,更认真。第二, 竞争让我们想到新的办法,创意。最后,竞争对顾客很有利 -- 价格降低, 质量提高, 品种更大,有比较。 虽然竞争还算(建议删去还算,这个词比较口语化)是件好事(加“,”标点)但是有的竞争者会失败,公司 (加入“会”更加连贯)受损失,甚至倒闭。人会产生自卑感(这句话可改为“失败会使人产生自卑感”,否则不能表达出“产生自卑感”这一动作的原因)。有几次我也失败(这是语序问题,中文一般不这么用,可改为“我也失败过几次”)。(加“但”突出转折)因为我是乐天派(加“,”标点)所以我看(“看”改为“认为”,用“看”表达想法非常口语化)失败也是很好的经验。失败会教(教给)我们很多东西。 如果没办法避免竞争哪(这里应该是“那”)就要努力学习,不断地发展,用对手的经验避免错误,提高自己的水平而要轻易(应该将“轻易”改为“坦然”,“轻易接受失败”是“I will accept my fail and do nothing to manage to succeed next time”,“坦然接受失败”是“I will accept my fail and try to succeed next time”)接受失败。0 votedJuly 19, 20191

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