teaching kids online? is there anybody who wants to be volunteer to say hello or maybe teaching my students via skype?

Please, help me guys. "Error Analysis" Please, help me. My lecture was given me this passage and asked me to find out the errors and to correct them. Actually, I have done it, but I am still confused and I need your corrections and suggestions, guys. Thank you so much for your kindness then ^^ ABSTRACT Teaching speaking simple Descriptive using neighborhood walk in Junior High School-1 Jakarta Class VII. Focus of English language teaching has recently shifted to a concern with developing discourse skills, it means that the aim of English Language Teaching is now seen as anal ding learners to develop of knowledge and skills with allow them to end age with whole texts approve pirate to social context either oral or written. The writer write this simple Description using neighborhood walk in Junior High School-1 Jakarta, that teaching speaking to competence of English Language, also to conclude by the system of effective learning students, aimed and programmed, the time is enough and will have a diligent students. The result of learning English, is the students have ability to communication in English, oral or written. The other, the students can said ability if they can have the order from the speaker, that they listening or reading. There for the English Language is the two aim communication, so the students must ability give the descriptive of their thinking in written that can understood by the listener