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大家好！ my name is Miriam, and I'm from the US. I am looking for a language partner to help me with my Chinese, and I can help you with English.
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    A sweet meal ("snack" may be more appropriate) called Golfeado.

    I'm a little bit excited and I want to share it with all of you. I few days ago I learned how to bake a Venezuelan meal called Golfeodo. The golfeado is like a cinnamon bread ("Cinnamon rolls" is a more common name) but instead of cinnamon we use something called Papelón. The papelón comes (no apostrophe needed) from the sugar cane distilled (" from distilled sugarcane") and we can find it in <s>almost all </s>(sounds odd) South America and other countries like Pakistan, India and Laos ("it can be found" sounds better).

    The Golfeado is a sweet mix of papelón and cheese. In some case (Like mine) we use a little bit of cinnamon to add <s>give a tasty</s> flavor.

    Here in Venezuela everybody love the golfeado and I'm thinking <s>in</s> about <s style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); background-color: transparent;">the possibility to</s> <s>make</s> making some regularly and <s>start to</s> selling it to <s>and</s> help <s>in</s> around my house with some extra money, what do you think? Did you ever <s>listen</s> hear about <s>the</s> golfeado? If you are interested in how <s>do</s> to make it, just text me and I will help you.

    Maybe later I could write the recipe here. see you!

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    looks great! overall, everything you wrote was easily understandable, so all of my suggested changes are small. You should definitely put the recipe up, it sounds fantastic!
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    July 2, 2019
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    some thoughts about promises

    We make <s>and</s> <s>receive</s> promises everyday, but how <s>much</s> many of them will be<s> achieved</s>? When someone makes me a promise<s>s to me</s> but then breaks it, I feel outraged somehow. Yet yesterday I gave my words to a friend of mine <s>so easily</s>, that today he asked me about this promise I <s>don't </s> didn't even remember <s>a word </s> my promise.<s> It's so ironic.</s> I hate to be fooled, though I have become the bad guy who fools others and breaks his promises. How can I <s>suppose</s> expect <s> </s>others <s>will</s> to treat me seriously if I can't keep my word<s>s as the same</s> either?

    my rewrite----
    We make and break promises daily. (1) When someone breaks a promise they made to me, I am outraged. However, yesterday I gave my word to a friend without thinking so that when he asked me about my promise today I couldn't remember it. I hate being fooled, and now I have become the guy that breaks his promises and fools others. How can I expect others to keep their word if I can't either? (2)

    1) I know that isn't exactly what you meant, but I couldn't think of any natural way to express exactly what you meant, so I figured this was close
    2) I was not entirely sure if you meant how others treat you, or if they take you seriously, so my rewrite just focused on expectations and standards
    I hope this is helpful!
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    June 22, 2019
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