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    Did human beings really reach the Moon?

    <s>A</s> 6% of Americans, 8% of Brits and a surprising<s>ly</s> 55% of <s>the</s> Russians think humans never landed on the Moon. It seems that the Apollo missions have left people doubting <s>until our days</s> even today.

    In my opinion, there are some inconsistencies on some images and photographs. For example, I’m puzzled when I see the short perspective in some of the pictures; it <s>would</s> seems as though you can reach the horizon with a few <s>some</s> steps forward. It’s like seeing one of the Little Prince’s moons and not actually the biggest <s>solar system</s> natural satellite in the solar system with a diameter of <s>a</s> 1/3 <s>from</s> of Earth.

    Anyway, I believe in the goals reached by humanity in the field of the space discovery. I know that humans were already able to fly around moon in the 60s but I’m not sure <s>about</s> if they were capable to land on the Moon with <s>all these</s> only fragile technology.

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    Thank you for reading my post. Feel free to correct and give your opinion
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    July 20, 2019
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    Les Parapluies de Cherbourg Récemment j'ai vu un grand film français appelé "Les Parapluies de Cherbourg." Le film parle d'une jeune fille, Geneviève, la mère de qui est propriétaire d'un petit magasin de parapluies à Cherbourg, et son petit-ami Guy, qui est mécanicien et habite avec sa malade tante Elise. Guy et Geneviève sont amoureux, mais la mère de Geneviève est contre ses relations. Puis, Guy est recruté à la militaire pour servir dans la Guerre d'Algérie. Geneviève écrit à Guy chaque jour sans réponse. Elle découvre qu'elle est enceinte, et croit qu'elle devra élever son enfant seule. Quelques ans plus tard Guy revient à Cherbourg, mais il ne peut pas retrouver Geneviève puisqu'elle est partie de Cherbourg. Au fin du film Guy et Geneviève se retrouvent de nouveau, mais chacun a leur propre famille -- c'est une réunion douce-amère. Le film est plein de couleurs vives et musique touchante, et la cinématographie est superbe. C'est un film qu'a la capacité de émouvoir tout le monde, et je vraiment te le recommande.
    July 20, 2019
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    I want to eat 螺蛳粉

    螺蛳粉 is <s>one of what I always want to eat foods </s>a dish I have always wanted to eat. It is not a local specialty <s>food</s> of Beijing, but it’s also <s>can</s> available here. I've heard that it’s very spicy, <s>also</s> and the taste is very <s>special </s>unique. <s>Seeing</s> Judging from the pictures that I looked up online, it does seem very spicy. It looks like noodles, but it’s different from the noodles that we normally eat. The noodles we eat are made of flour, but <s>it’s</s> this dish is made of rice flour. I’ve eaten rice noodles before. I like <s>it</s> them.
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    July 19, 2019
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    El toreo Una tradición muy importante en la cultura española es el toreo, un espectáculo en que un matador intenta a engañar un toro y luego matarlo. El toreo es un costumbre muy antiguo, datando del tiempo medieval. Ronda, un pequeño pueblo en la provincia española de Andalucía, dice ser el lugar del nacimiento del toreo. La tradición propagaba a todos lados de la España y del mundo, y actualmente existen cincos estilos regionales del toreo. El toreo incluso está practicado en Portugal, la Francia, y Latinoamérica. En la España el toreo está considerado ser un aspecto esencial de la cultura y una presentación de estilo, técnica, y coraje. Aunque es un parte del patrimonio español, algunas personas piensan que es un "deporte de sangre" cruel y brutal porque el toro está torturado antes de muere. En Cataluña, Costa Rica, algunas ciudades en Galicia, y en algunos estados de México el toreo está prohibido. Algunos lugares (por ejemplo en Portugal) sólo prohiben la matanza del toro. Sin embargo, en la España la mayoría de gente apoyan el toreo todavía, y lo consideran una importante institución cultural.
    July 19, 2019
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    Indoor Plants

    <s>You</s> Everyone should have something <s>which</s> that <s>makes</s> helps them relax and chill out. Daily routines <s>is</s> are not easy, <s>it takes a big part from your life</s> (they are exhausting?). You have to struggle every day at work, on the street, on the bus <s>or</s> and even with your thoughts.
    Actually, I have something, indoor plants, which make me feel comfortable, relaxed, and help me <s>run away </s>escape from my <s>exhusted</s> exhausting daily routine. <s>That thing is indoor plants</s>(this sentence feels awkward). They really let me calm down and <s>unstressed</s> de-stress when I see myself is surrounded by them.
    <s>Sometimes, y</s>You should make <s>enough</s> space in your house or <s>an</s> apartment to put indoor plants; they give the place a nice <s>hilarious</s> touch.
    Indoor plants are not only for relaxation or comfort, but they also <s>are also</s> make your house or apartment<s>s</s> look <s>good</s> well-decorated.

    Imagine that you have a cup of tea in the middle of a small garden in your house.
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    July 17, 2019
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    La Cathédrale Notre-Dame et sa incendie Le quinze avril 2019, la Cathédrale Notre-Dame, une église Parisienne bien-aimée de tout le monde, s'a enflammé. Personne ne sait encore la raison pour l'incendie -- quelques gens pensent que les rénovations extensives de la cathédrale causait l'incendie, ou peut-être une cigarette. Pompiers ont éteint le feu il y a quinze heures après son début. Le toit et la flèche entière étaient détruits. Heureusement, les trésors de la cathédrale comme la couronne d'épines de Jesus étaient sauvés. Tout le monde à Paris et dans la reste du monde étaient très chagrinés de voir cette tragedie, mais avec espoir la cathédrale peut tôt être reconstruit. Voilà, c'est tout pour aujourd'hui. Merci bien de corriger ça!
    July 17, 2019
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    Making sentences

    The ultimate <s>popuse</s> purpose is to gain a good reputation in international society.
    Are you in good shape or are you struggling a bit financially <s>about your financial</s>?
    Nick is camera shy.
    <s>We</s> You are requested to keep strict confidentiality <s>of</s> regarding the internal report.
    Our factory is short on production staff.
    Our department is understaffed.
    If you get both verbal warning and written warning more than two times, you will get fired.
    His words <s>doesnt</s> don't represent our company's opinion, since it is inconsistent with our company's values.
    We respect different viewpoints. Thank you for bringing this to our attention.
    It's a raw (?) deal; he is going to complain to the head office.
    The sales in seco<s>u</s>nd quarter reached a peak.
    We have alcoholic beverages and green tea, do you have a preference?
    What time will you be least busy?
    I trust your taste in fashion.
    His <s>dead</s> death was a big <s>body</s> blow <s>for</s> to his mother.
    I am in a bit of a rush, let's talk about it tomorrow.
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    July 17, 2019
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    My dream job

    My dream job is to become a Finance Manager for a reputed institution, preferably in the <s>I would</s><s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);"> </s><s>prefer a institution from</s> construction or manufacturing industry, since i have lot of experience in those two areas. To be eligible for my dream position, i <s>should have</s> need a Master's degree in finance <s>stream</s> and at least three years of experience in a similar position such as senior accountant. <s>Although</s> i recently acquired my Master's degree in finance from the University of Colombo, but up to now i <s>am</s> have been working as an accountant. The idea <s>about to be a</s> of being a finance manager <s>is</s> came from my childhood. My neighbor is a<s>n</s> finance officer at a government organization. He <s>used</s> has a luxury house with a car and <s>have much</s> a great reputation from the villages. He is the main reason behind <s>that makes</s> my ambition.
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    July 17, 2019
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    Mi programa de televisión favorito Desde hace poco, estoy mirando mi programa de televisión favorito, Gilmore Girls, de nuevo. Es un programa fantástico sobre una mujer llamada Lorelei y su hija Rory. Aunque son madre y hija, son mejores amigas (Rory nació cuando Lorelei tenía dieciseis años, entonces la diferencia en edad no es muy grande). Viven en un pequeño pueblo llamada Stars Hollow donde viven muchos caracteres peculiares. Lorelai trabaja en una posada y sueña con abrir su proprio hotel. Rory es muy lista y va a una escuela muy famosa y prestigiosa; quiere ser periodista cuando ser grande. Bueno, Gilmore Girls es un programa super cómico y conmovedor. Muchas gracias por corregir este entrada del diaio!
    July 17, 2019
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    Can you check and correct my essay??😢

    The Facts of Healthy Country Japan.
    <s>Where </s>What is the healthiest country? It is Spain<s>Spanish</s>, not Japan. There are many health issues in Japan. These problems are hard to solve. People in Japan are getting<s>s</s> unhealthier than ever before because mental health issues and lifestyle changes are increasing.
    There are many people who suffer from mental issues in Japan. First, they feel strong stress from their work. Japan is rated the worst country by usage of paid vacation <s>at the paid vacation usage rate ranking</s> (Gatayama, 2018). This <s>is</s> shows that Japanese people spend too much time <s>for</s> at their work, and they cannot get enough time to rest and enjoy their <s>enough</s> free time. Second, bullying is increasing; it is even becoming one of the common social issues in Japan. The rate of bullying in school has been increasing for three years. (Kawano, 2018) In addition, there are many types of bullying, such as workplace bullying and cyber bullying which is bullying on the <s>by using</s> internet. <s>These</s> This bullying can cause mental issues, such as PTSD. Thus, the amount of people who suffer from mental issues is increasing in Japan.
    These health problems that has never happened before appear<s>s</s> because of lifestyle. First, the number of obese people are increasing in Japan (Hooper, 2012). Once, common Japanese food <s>style</s> was a balanced diet, such as rice, fish and miso soup, but now Japanese people often eat<s>s</s> western food <s>now</s>. Second, the time spent <s>spending</s> on exercising is decreasing in Japan. Children <s>came to</s> no longer play outside because video game and smart phone <s>became</s> are more popular. It is not only a problem among children but also among adult people. People use public transportation instead of walking or cycling because of <s>transportation</s> developed transportation. Therefore, the Japanese lifestyle has changed significantly.
    An increase of mental issues and lifestyle changes prove Japanese people <s>gets</s> are <s>more</s> unhealthier than ever before. Stress and bad lifestyle lead people to unhealthiness. Therefore, people can no longer say, “the Japanese are healthy”.
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    July 15, 2019
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