Could anybody correct this writing for me?
Several years ago, Steve Jobs gave an advice "stay hungry, stay foolish " <s>to graduates</s> in a graduation ceremony. <s>It is was a completely correct sentence at any time.</s>
This <s>word</s> quote is <s>very big and </s>full of mysteries. What <s>humans</s> people have already known is <s>only</s> just a small part of it. We have achieved some progress owing <s>to</s> a desire to acquire truth. For example, Newton wanted to have a better understanding of <s>the</s> movement, so he <s>built</s> made up the gravity theory. Similarly, Einstein <s>had</s> was not <s>been</s> satisfied with the physics situation and wanted to know some natural phenomena which could not be explained at that time, which has stimulated him to discover the relativity theory.
If we want to succeed we must stay humble. Being humble will make you sincere rather than stupid. Another reason for being humble is that it <s>can</s> helps us develop good relationships with others. This can make you happy and increase our well being. In contrast, an arrogant person is more likely to <s>make</s> embarrass others and hurt their feelings, reducing many opportunities to improve his own knowledge and skills.
From my perspective, I totally agree on Steve's quote. Everyone must stay curious and foolish to this world, then we will make great progress later.
Good job Lin!
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