nimen hao
<strike>wo lai zhong guo 2006 sept nian le</strike>.
(wo 2006 nian jiu yue lai de zhong guo)wo de zhuan <strike>yi</strike>
(ye) ke shi xi yi ( lin <strike>chuan</strike>
(chuang )) .
women da xue xue xi zhong wen buyao le.wo de yisi shi zheshi sui bain xuesheng de.(
wo men da xue shi bu yao qiu xue xi zhong wen de.wo de yi si shi zheshi sui bian xue xi de.)ruguo women xiang xue xi zhong wen..women ke yi xue xi.wo xiang xue xi zhong wen.suo yi wo cong di yi nian wo kai shi ziji xue xi zhong wen.xian zai wo jue de wo de zhongwen tigao le..danshi
haiyou yao (“hai xu yao” is better )henduo shijian.zai <strike>su</strike>
(shu) jia <strike>haishi</strike>
(haiyou) hanjia wo you shijian <strike>wo</strike> ke yi xue xi zhong wen danshi women de xueqi kaishi wo
(add "jiu"(就) means "so") meiyou shijian xue xi zhong wen
le.