Well done Andy! A really good piece of writing that gives us a great deal of detail about how you're feeling and what is a typical day. I've highlighted a couple of different word choices (such as minor/small) and a different phrase about not losing their trust. Keep up the good work!

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This morning, when I woke up, I decided to go to see the doctor, there some minor problems with my body, although they are not serious, they still make me uncomfortable. So I text my manager ask for half day’s leave and went to hospital. Luckily, even after all this time, I didn't get any worse.

And another lucky thing happened to me. It is about yesterday's interview. I thought I didn't pass it but they told me that they want me. I am surprised and now I must prepare for the project. I need to study and work harder, because I don't want let them down.

My boyfriend came for me tonight, we ate a simple dinner together and I feel happy. Even though I'm not sure how much longer we can be dating. but at least for now, I am happy.