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Hey ~ my friend, I am Karen. I am serious on study, looking for language partner here. Please drop a msg to me if you want to learn Chinese.

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Sleeping 5-6 hours recently I am very stressful recently. I got 2 group assignments and 1 individual assignment, yes it's not much but very hard to me to conduct. I started to do my individual assignment from last Sunday, it is a reflection essay about international marketing. I really dont have idea about the reflection initially, even till now. I was trying to rephrase what is internation environment of IM, what is mavro environment and what impact in intertional marketing caused by environment. But I think what I wrote now can easily get the info in the webpage because they are very basic concept, I should give some practical example of international companies to support my views. I am really stressed out, I cant fall to sleep everynight. I slept 5 hours on Sun, I went to sleep this morning 2:45am, then got up 8:20am. Everytime I open my eyes, or my mentaly wake up, I will start to think about my essay. I really got problem in essay construct. I will try my best to figure it out, hope it will going well.
March 29, 2017
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《兄弟》与文革
《兄弟》与文革

如今我看着《兄弟》。最然头几篇章里面讲“屁股”的段落稍微多点，但我还是看得很开心。然而，读到这句话的时候“文化革命来到我们刘镇”，我就不得不叹了一大口气。每当我读中文小说时，一看到“文革”这两个字我就马上晓得我小说里面所喜欢的人物肯定将面临不好的经历。果然，《兄弟》里面的宋凡平也不例外。

李光头说每当他回想他的继父时，他就想起一句话“一条好汉”。对宋凡平这种人来讲，“一条好汉”的确名副其实。他在革命的慌乱中尽力地企图保护他的家庭，不让他们受伤或者担忧。可惜，作为一位地主及老师，他保护不了自己，收到很残忍的虐待。

读了宋凡平被虐待这一段之后，我就放下了书然后去楼下泡茶。我在厨房泡茶时，我的父母和哥哥都在客厅。由于我还是被刚才读的那一段感到忐忑不安，我开始设想了。一旦自己陷入文革这种情况，我会怎么办。我会举报或者批斗我的家人吗？他们会举报或者批斗我吗？那我的朋友，同事或者老师呢？

我第一次想法是我当然不会的。我是个好人，又不是个贱人，怎么会做这种不分青红皂白的事呢？不过，我又想了一回(我又回想了一下/ 我又想了一会)。既然当时那么多人都这样做，我怎么那么确定自己不会照样做？也许他们是迫不得已的。他们不先举报别人，别人就会举报他们。也许当时的红卫兵真心认为这么做是对的。如果我发现我的父亲是个杀人狂的话，我就会举报他。对那么热狂的人来讲（甚至可以说被洗脑的人）阶级敌人相等于杀人狂之类的坏人。

虽然有些人是因为迫不得已或者政治狂热的原因而虐待别人，我认为有一部分的人简直是乐在其中的。在社会中的人际关系，除了友谊，爱情和尊重，还有些不好的情绪，比如嫉妒，仇恨和贪婪。大家的生活中都有些让他们感觉委屈的人。有可能是那个比他们漂亮的邻居，孝顺他们的老师，或者让他们穿小鞋的老板。文革来的时候，你就有机会报复他们。在《兄弟》里，宋凡平曾经把三个屈辱他家庭的三个中学生打得鼻青脸肿的。文革来之后，那三个学生就趁机会报复他。

即使它让我感到忐忑不安，我还打算继续读《兄弟》。我恐怕可怜巴巴的宋凡平不会有什么好下场的。想理解中国的人必须理解中国的文化和历史。文革是现代历史中很重要的及有影响的时代，于是我要对它有一定得了解。不过，我接下来读的一本书肯定不会跟文革有关系。我本来想读《三体》，但我听说连这类似的科幻书竟然也有文革的一部分！
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March 29, 2017
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Hi Doanld Zoo Coffee uses demographic factor (markets by age, gender, income, ethic background, and family life cycle) as well as geographic factor (markets by region of a country or the world, market size, market density or climate) In the aspect of demographic factor, Zoo Coffee’ main target market is men and women between the ages of 25-44, target this group by offering certain drinks and food that appeal to them. Zoo Coffee adopts a premium pricing strategy, so making the target consumer groups more clearly, only people in middle and high income classes have the purchasing power. Besides, people with good education maybe easier to accept and identify coffee culture. For these groups of people not merely demand good quality coffee but also in spiritual enjoyment. In the other aspect of geographical factor, Zoo Coffee is usually located in district shopping centre. People not only have a high demand for quality of life, but also a higher expectation of experience consumption. And as Singapore is a tropical climate of the country, most of customers come to Zoo Coffee may be animal lovers.
March 19, 2017
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昨天和今天那个我喜欢的女孩不在
我最近<strike>买过</strike>（买了）自己的溜冰鞋，然后今天用我的溜冰鞋去溜冰。可是那个我很喜欢的女孩不在。我<strike>怪</strike>（why you blame? maybe you could say 我抱怨自己不知道她在哪里）她在哪里。现在有8天没有看她。我好<strike>像</strike>她（想她）。中国里要听那首歌如果你好想一个女孩？（recommen 《好想你》《如果你还在就好了》《爱要怎么说出口》。。。there are so many songs, its depends on the melody what kind of style you like, because most of songs talk about love...lover.... ）
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March 13, 2017
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乐观的态度
如果我遇到烦恼，我提醒自己不要生气。如果不好的事情已经发生了，不可能改变已经发生的事。但是我总是可能（总是，可能 these two words shouldnt appear in one sentence. maybe you could say : 但是我总是可以选择对生活的态度）选对生活的态度，所以我试着用积极的态度处理（deal with something ， you should say 处理所有的问题 / 试着用积极的态度面对所有的情况）所有的情况。有时候我单独坐（坐着，it's should be a status, not a quick action），试着冷静下来。有时候我作一个(做一些)我喜欢的活动，比如跳舞，看电视剧，绘画。有时候我去散步，欣赏大自然的美。有时候我告诉自己：所有的事情都是临时（here should be a adj, like 临时的，暂时的）。在苦难的情况（情况下/ 情况中）， <strike>有</strike>积极的态度经常影响别人的感情。如果我的态度是乐观的，可能让别人放松一下，改善气氛，改善人际关系。然后我们可以合作改善状况。
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March 13, 2017
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Are these sentence correct grammatically?
我和朋友有很多计划。我们是几个朋友打算买礼物给她。先我们有不同买什么。但是最后打算我们一起买一个漂亮礼物。几天前的婚礼我们去朋友有没有问题？
我和朋友有很多计划。 ,（用comma）我们<strike>是</strike>几个朋友是打算买礼物给她。<strike> </strike><strike>先 </strike> （首先）我们<strike>有不同 </strike>不知道买什么。（用comma ,）但是<strike>最后打算</strike>我们一起买一个漂亮礼物。(但是我们最后打算一起买一个漂亮的礼物) 几天前的婚礼我们去朋友有没有问题？（不知道你要表达什么）

我们<strike>去</strike>到了的时候发现在家有很多操纵（操纵？不知道你要说什么）。（用，）但是他的家很小。我和朋友打算大的操纵要放在家。 ，以后放小的操纵。因为有的人买了之后不用的（因为有的人买了之后就不用了）。 有的操纵采取仓库。因此一个朋友采取自己的家。（不知道你要表达什么） 最后他的家很漂亮。 ，然后我们准备为新娘。我和朋友去新娘跟漂亮礼物。他的新娘非常好。 ，因此在新娘的家里我们<strike>看了</strike>见到了别的朋友。<strike> 所以我们看见新朋友</strike>。（我们也认识了新朋友。） <strike>食品很好。他看了礼物时候很快乐</strike>。（食物吃起来味道很好，他看到了礼物非常开心）这是我去的最好的婚礼之一。我们很快乐了。

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March 12, 2017
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voab practice 1
仍然-我仍然学习汉语
申请/他申请新工作
矿泉水/ 我一般喝矿泉水。我很喜欢喝矿泉水。
究竟/ <strike>不管我的考试究竟我肯定继续学习</strike>，不管我的考试结果究竟怎么样，我肯定会继续学习。（1.对这个词的理解有误 2.这里需要comma 断句）
签证/ 如果你想去英国的话需要签证。
增加/<strike> </strike>我很想<strike>增加</strike>我的口语水平。 我很想提高我的英语水平 （1. 增加这个词多数是用来表述量变的，也就是quantity. ）
塑料袋/ 我试一试不用塑料袋。塑料袋污染。我想试一试不用塑料袋，因为塑料袋会污染环境。 （1.句子没说完整的情况下，中间用comma。 2. “我试一试不用塑料袋” 这句话是考虑的结果，那要补充完整原因，所以需要用 “因为”）
任何/ 我看任何电影，（任何电影我都会看）
秒/ 15秒<strike>只好</strike>地铁到了（之后）
熟悉 /<strike>我熟悉巴黎非常好，我十年住了那里。</strike> 我对巴黎非常熟悉，我住在那里十年了。
故意/<strike> 我故意走工作，因为我体育身体</strike> （不知道你想表达什么？）
详细/ 你的说明很详细
敲/ <strike>所以</strike>我五次敲门没有人开门 我敲门了五次，没有人开门。（句子的顺序，还有需要 comma）
顺利/ 这个星期工作很复杂，不顺利。
理想/ 为了他的理想他帮助穷人。为了他的理想，他帮助穷人。
邀请/ 我明天邀请你中饭。我明天邀请你吃中午饭。
首都/ 法国的首都就是巴黎。
引起/ 经济危机引起很多问题。
付款/ 他用信用卡付款。
速度/ 最近你的进步速度很快。
标准/ 这个考试就是言语标准 这个考试，是测试语言是否标准。
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March 12, 2017
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Explain how your college or university uses marketing communications to recruit students Hi teachers or language partners, this article is more about marketing communication. I am not good at writing acedemic things, would you please help me to correct and give more info to me? Thank you! This university is runing for over 60 years in Singapore. It's opening to local student also international student, it has many favorable lights on its operation. First of all, it offers 3 types of courses including diploma, bachelor degree and master course, for those international student whom intend to study in its campus, they would like to provide a free tour which mean they cover the cost of round flight ticket and living. Secondly, they have been cooperating with many oversea study agents for years in Asia, these agents have been very cooperative with them. University supporting team hold event of advertising to international students about study abroad every year in some of agent' city. Furthermore, on local recruting aspect, they have placed posters in metro stations as well as on body of buses. They offer promotion or bonus to existing student to recommend friends join in . University also use social media advertising, such as facebook and ins for conducting announcement and promotion. ...what eles ?
March 8, 2017
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How to ask this question 他们从来没有遇到过这样的问题。 They had ever seen this case . Or They have never seen this case. So, which one is correct??
March 6, 2017
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Sharing one poem and one song with you I had a bad mood today, but I tried to adjust myself this afternoon. I got up from bed, made noodle soup, took a shower and put mask on my face, while I was watching the Chinese talk show <Jin Xing Show>. I really want to say something to myself, although nobody being with me, I still need to move on. From today, I am gonna investing myself. Buy pretty clothes, study hard, learn how to make up or skin care, read more book and meet new friends, go somewhere I have never been. And waiting for someone coming to my life then stay with me forever. I was using this poem in my last resignation letter with the song in below. When you look up this poem by chance, try to listen this song (田馥甄《灵魂伴侣》) while you reading. 与你同行 Walking With You 席慕容 by Xi Murong 我一直想要和你一起走上那条美丽的山路有柔风有白云有你在我身旁倾听我快乐和感激的心 I've always been eager to be with you walking on that beautiful mountain trail with soft wind, white clouds and you by my side listening to my happy and grateful heart 我的要求其实很微小只要有过那样的一个夏日只要走过那样的一次 in fact I ask for a little that I can enjoy such a walk with you in such a summer 而朝我迎来的日复以夜却都是一些不被料到的安排还有那麽多琐碎的错误将我们慢慢地慢慢地隔开让今夜的我终於明白 yet day and night what walks toward me is always some unexpected arrangements so many petty mistakes slowly separate us to let me understand tonight in the end 所有的悲欢都已成灰烬任世间哪一条路我都不能与你同行 all joys and sorrows have turned into ashes no way in the world for me to walk with you Walking With You
February 25, 2017
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