my interest in the master's programme in management

My interest in the master’s programme <em>(in USA - Master's Program)</em> in management is based on my career plan, following my rewarding experiences in <em>(could use "with" - it is very subtle, but can mean slightly different things)</em> the accounting firm. I would like to switch my career from the sector of assurance to financial advisory <em>(in the USA - would simply say, "from Assurance to Financial Advisory")</em>. In a project in manufacturing, where the client newly purchased a local company, I worked with the financial advisory teams to address the client's business issues in an optimal way.

*** highlights in green mean that the phrase is grammatically. The comments in italics are suggestions for consideration.

Favorite Animal

Owls are such smart and beautiful birds. Their instincts and mysterious eyes caught me up.

Dogs are in second place.

*Perfect - no correction needed.*

*** I would point out that the phrase "caught me up" is idiomatic in the USA and you have used it correctly. If it was not meant in this fashion, then I would use the phrase provided by Liz.

things about pets

Nowadays, more and more people are likely to raise pets. Some people prefer fish like goldfish, and some adore mammals like dogs and cats. While I, personally, have owned two kinds of pets. They <s>are</s> were a goldfish and a rabbit.

<s>Fish is a kind of pets</s><em> (options: "A fish is the kind of pet" or Fish are the kind of pets")</em> that requires just a small room <s>to live</s>. You can have several goldfish<s>es</s> <em>(the plural for fish is fish, so the plural for goldfish is just goldfish)</em> in one bowl. Through the transparent glass wall of the bowl, you can see those colorful and lively little fish, with their bubbling mouth and luminous scales, shuttling back and forth in the water. Without annoying noise and making your home dirty, you keep them in a jar, feed them and change water regularly. And these beautiful little creatures can bring you a sensation of joy and calm <em>(this is grammatically correct, however I would consider rephrasing to "a joyful and calm sensation")</em>.

Mammals <s>is</s> <s>a</s> are the kind of pets that you can have lots of interaction with <em>(this is technically incorrect. Sentences should not end with a preposition. However, this is commonly heard in the USA. It should read, "Mammals are the kind of pets with which you can have lots of interaction.)</em> <s>Like dogs and cats, they have sounds to respond</s> <em>(options: "Like dogs and cats, they respond to you and you", "Like dogs and cats, they have sounds to which they respond and you" or "Like dogs and cats, they responds to sounds and you")</em> are available to touch and caress them. And their fuzzy looks <s>intrigue</s> <em>(incorrect phrase: you could try "encourage you to", "drive you to", "cause you to want to")</em> protect them. This reminds me of my rabbit. Its fur was as white as snow, with its tiny nose and two long flurry ears. When it jumped, it looked like a snow ball rolling forward. Mammal pets are usually really cute.

No matter what pets people like, ranging from mammals to reptiles, pets are always our friends and companions. We should treat them well and love them from our hearts.