第二个日记：人们为什么这么好？ （你说的话让人找不到它的主语在哪儿，当你说‘人们为什么这么好’的时候，你应该加一个主语，我的意思就是说：“哪里的人有这么好。”比如说，你其实是想说‘中国的人为什么这么好’的时候，你就应该在这句话的前面加上‘中国’这个词语，你明白了吗？）
I'm afraid there are words you can't read, so i gave you use the english translation again
I hope you will not
（ You said this one can't find its subject is, when you said 'good' why, you should add a subject, i mean is that ： "where there are so good." for example, you'd like to say "chinese people 'why, you should be in the sentence add in front of the" china' word, you understand? ）
