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Bonjour. Je m'appelle Robin et je suis anglais. Je voudrais améliorer mon français.
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    Formal letter

    Dear Sir or Madame,

    I am writing to enquire about the Swedish class, advertised on your site the day before yesterday. I have been meaning to sign up for this, but I have a few questions.
    First off, I would like to know when the class is timetabled and how long is it going to be1? Secondly, how much is it priced2? Are there any discounts for students?
    Then, I would be grateful if you send me a brochure of the class so I can learn more <s> of </s> about the class. Yet, anyway, for the time being,3 I would like to book the course and would appreciate if you give me some information about how can I do this.

    Yours sincerely,
    Ekaterina

    1 "Class" is a bit ambiguous here, because it could refer to individual lessons, or the course as a whole. Depending on what you're interested in, you might say "when classes are timetabled and how long are they" or "when the class is timetabled and how many weeks it runs for".

    2 Either "how is it priced" or "how much does it cost"

    3 I'm not sure what you mean by "for the time being" here. Perhaps you want to book before you get the brochure and answers to your questions, but might need to cancel depending on what you find out. In which case, you might say something like "Nonetheless, I would like provisionally to book a place on the course and would appreciate it if you could give me some information about how I can do this."
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    August 20, 2020
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    Responding to a customer <s>complain</s> complaint

    A customer <s>made a</s> gave [1] bad feedback concerning his stay in a holiday resort. <s>Indeed, as he</s> He mentioned to the receptionist team at the beginning of his stay<s>,</s> that he wanted <s>to get</s> a daily cleaning service for his accommodation [or maybe "he wanted his accomodation cleaned daily"]. However, no one came in his <s>cottage</s> chalet [?] to clean it up. This situation was awkward <s>to</s> for this client who didn't feel free to leave a bad review at the end of his stay. After getting the feedback, the manager took time to respond to his review with <s>all his apologies</s> an apology:
    Dear Mister,
    Thank you for sharing your review concerning your stay in our holiday resort. Please, accept our sincerest <s>apologie</s> apologies concerning the serious problem that you have had during your stay. <s>Indeed, one of our policies is</s> It is our policy to make sure that each client <s>spend</s> has an enjoyable stay with us <s>from</s> by offering proper and quality services. In order to avoid that this issue <s>will happen</s> happening again [or "to avoid this issue reoccuring"], we are going to improve the communication between our different working teams. Meanwhile, I personally recommend <s>to</s> that you make a <s>complain</s> complaint <s>from</s> on our website and we undertake to give you a total refund <s>of</s> for the cleaning service [or "a total refund of the cost of the cleaning service"] that you couldn't get during your stay. We <s>expect</s> hope that we will have another [2] opportunity to <s>welcoming</s> welcome you back in the future<s>, therefore,</s> so that we can redeem ourselves. Please feel free to contact us if you have any other questions concerning your <s>refunding</s> refund.

    Best regards

    [1] One gives feedback, but one makes a complaint
    [2] I think it would be better as either "... another opportunity to welcome you ..." or "... an opportunity to welcome you back ..."
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    May 20, 2020
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    Essay

    Nowadays there is a discussion of whether it is necessary to plan our lives or just go with the flow. In my opinion, it is indispensable to be the master of your life.
    Firstly, much as we might want to have a spontaneous life, our lives are scheduled. We wake up at a definite time, have our breakfast and go to study or work. It makes our life easier. Very often people, waking up on <s>holydays</s> holidays and having an all-free day ahead * just do not know what to do. Consequently, they spend all day long doing nothing and wasting their time. <s>Having</s> Had they planned their day in advance they would have a chance to spend a more profitable day: time for work, time for sport and time for hobbies. It is my belief that going to bed with a feeling that you did your best to make this day productive, counts for a lot.
    Moreover, planning ahead allows you to have more control. Of course, things change but having your day in front of you will help you to figure out what alternation need to be done in order to keep the high level of efficiency.

    What is more, planning our lives, we still have many chances to enjoy the spontaneous side of life as we can not foresee everything.
    To sum up I would like to emphasize that life is changeable and unpredictable and having a schedule helps us to find order in chaos.

    * I changed this to make "all-free" act as an adjective, although that's a little bit clumsy. An alternative way of expressing it might have been to say "waking up on a holiday and having the entire day ahead free"
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    July 10, 2019
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    English friend

    I hope to find <s>an english-native</s> a native English * friend for learning <s>a very good english</s> spoken and written English very well!

    [*] Meaning someone who was born in England. If you mean someone who's native language is English, then you could say something like "a native English speaking friend", or "a friend who is a native English speaker". If you mean someone from the UK, but you didn't want to exclude Scottish or Welsh people, you could say "a native British friend".
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    July 4, 2019
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    <s>Communate</s> Communicate with other people

    Hello my name is Arya Este

    I would like to talk with other people <s>for</s> in order to improve my English (or maybe my Spanish, German or Russian)
    I'm open to learning a new language !

    I can help you with French !!

    Thanks
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    July 3, 2019
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    César à Cambridge Cambridge est une ville plate. Mais juste au sud de la ville il y a des collines. La route du centre de Cambridge vers les collines s'appelle, logiquement, "Hills Road", c'est à dire "La Rue des Collines". Les collines s'appellent "The Gog Magogs", nommés d'après des géants de l'Ancient Testament. Il y a un fort de l'âge de fer qui s'appelle "Wandlebury Ring". Près de ça, une rue romaine. Je suis né à Cambridge. Quand j'étais un petit garçon, mon père m'a dit que Jules César avait écrit de la région dans son compte de son incursion en Grande-Bretagne. César avait dit, selon mon père, que les arbres de Wandlebury était rouge avec le sang des victimes sacrifielles des druides. Peut-être ç'est vrai: je ne sais pas.
    May 13, 2019
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    Cambridge Cambridge est un ville du sud-est de l'Angleterre, située à quatre-vingt kilometres du nord de Londres. À Cambridge il y a une université célèbre qui a plus que huite cents ans. En fait, il y a deux universités. Il y a, bien sûr, «The University of Cambridge». Mais il y a aussi «Anglia Ruskin University». Anglia Ruskin est devenue une université il y a vingt-sept ans. À cet temps, elle a été renommée «Anglia Polytechnic University». Avant ça, elle s'appelait «Anglia Higher Education College» (le College d'Anglia du Education plus Haute), et avant ça elle s'appellait «Cambridgeshire College of Arts and Technolgy» (le College de Cambridgeshire des Artes et du Technologie). Cambridge n'est pas une grande ville commes Londres ou Manchester. Dans une sens, elle est une ville rurale. Par example, pres du centre de la ville il y a des champs avec des vaches: https://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-england-cambridgeshire-37378007 Mais Cambridge devient plus grande. Elle est une centre des technologies informatiques et biomédicales. Un des succès de Cambridge est ARM qui - au site d'une ancienne ferme universitaire - conçoit les microprocesseurs utilisés en la plupart des smartphones du monde.
    May 3, 2019
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    Corrots Carrots: the French are fans

    While each French household consumes it about 9,2 kilos by year about 9.2 kilos per year of them - which made makes it the second most eaten vegetable most eat in France - the price of this orange root posts has had an increase of 40% compared to the last five years ago (or "has increased by %40 over the last five years")
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    May 2, 2019
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    Why do we have nightmares?

    This morning I woke up anxious and feeling sad because I had a nightmare. It was not a big deal but frightening me enough to feel bad when I woke up.

    Thus, I wondered how and why we have nightmares and this is what I found in a newspaper article on internet :

    According to a Canadian psychiatre psychiatrist, Tore Nielsen, based in Montréal, a nightmare follows a specific structure in five steps :

    1) The sleeper elaborates a nightmarish story based on his real fears
    2) This story creates a feeling of fear for the sleeper during his sleep
    3) This fear is analysed by the brain
    4) This fear is turned into a bearable memory
    5) If the fear is unbearable, then the sleeper awakes from his sleep.

    A nightmare is created in the hippocampus where the contextual memories are, then it activates the amygdala (in the brain) where the feelings of fears fear are. This organ makes us feel as if we were "reliving" a dangerous situation so it creates a feeling of fear. Then, the feeling activates the cortex that turns it into a bearable memory.

    Nightmares often happen during the rapid eye movement phase of the sleep. The sleeper seems to be deeply asleep but he already shows signs he is about to be awoken (the eyes move but the limbs don't).

    Some medicines and events in our life can be the cause of nightmares. It seems that nightmares are useful to help us deal with our emotions and memories. A bad dream aims at turning unbearable fears of some events that happened during the day into bearable memories. The fears are often staged into weird, strange or unbelievable situations in the dreams. The stress and negative emotions follow some steps made by the brain in order to alleviate them through the dreams.

    If a nightmare goes on and on every night, it seems that the brain isn't working enough on it or just can't solve it. The only solution is that the person has to go and see a doctor or a therapist in order to solve his problem (or maybe "The only solution is for the person to go etc"). It may mean his anxiety is too deep and needs to be treated medically. It may be a sign of a depression for example.

    I thought of writing about it because I had a nightmare early this morning before waking up. I am going to change school in some months (or "in a few months' time") (on in September) and I dreamt about that and of course in my nightmare, everything was negative from being rejected by everybody and to doing bad work. I woke up a bit anxious and sad. After talking about it to my husband and a friend, I felt better. I just hope I won't dream about it anymore.
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    April 23, 2019
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    April 22, 2019
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