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The other day, I had a problem with my car so I took it to the mechanic, but they were closed. I'd never have expected that they would be closed. I should have called first and checked, but it was a weekday afternoon.

I later found out that they are closed every Monday.

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Essay about death penalty . Can you correct for me?

Capital punishment is one of the biggest challenges in post-modern society. In the face of the developing and enlargement of human rights, death penalty seems to have regressed. The basis of human rights is the right to be alive, until this issue became personal. If your family member is murdered by someone, you will rethink about human rights. The ugly truth is, is that we are violent in nature. The punishment system is not efficient to contain our violence.

The “Center on Wrongful Convictions” from Northwestern University Law School has been working on investigating errors in lawsuits since 1989. In 2013, they helped 33 people of 87 releases. The number of errors are decreasing because they are using DNA evidence. Even so, it is clear the law system is inefficient to judge all crimes. Therefore, the problem of unfair sentences is related to the law system, not about rights. However, to convict another person to death will not bring someone back alive. It will be violence against violence.

The death penalty brings people a sense of equilibrium of justice. Therefore, people expect the law system to punish the individuals. The other aspect we should consider is related to the high expenses to maintain prisoners in jail. The cost drops dramatically if they apply the death penalty. It seems a little unfair to pay for other's mistakes like “ the innocent pay for sinners”. Although, I agree with Hobbies, when he said "A man is a wolf to another man”. In my opinion, violence is a cycle. We should not naturalise violent behaviour, because we are more than just simple animals. Instead we should apply efficient punishment, we should establish new a lifestyle and improve quality of life. Sometimes, poverty is related to violence, so, money is an important factor and it is essential to educate people. Not a typical education, but an education that brings understanding. We need to understand ourselves and human behaviour because punishment is just a temporary measure. It will not extinguish violence inside of us.

If I understood it correctly the speech "We missed the bus." You: "Then we’ll have to walk."

You're talking about a situation now and what you have to do about the situation in the future. At the moment of the conversation you haven't started walking yet.

We missed the bus. So we had to walk. You'll write/tell this after the the completed action. Maybe when you're explaining to someone what happened.

We missed the chance containing the virus, so we'll have to face it's devastating spread. The missed chance happened in the past, the pandemic is happening now the devastation spread of the virus is to be expected in the future.

We missed the chance containing the virus, so we had to face it's devastating spread. You'll write this after the pandemic is over and the outcome was clear.

I hope I answered your question correctly, hope that helps