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说说我的一次旅行经历
去年夏天我去北京开始学习普通话。我在那儿学汉语学了六个星期。虽然香港人的广东话比普通话好(“好”这个字在这里意思不明确,作者意思应该是广东话比普通话容易), 但是现在我在香港练习我的普通话。我一共学汉语学了八个月了(可以改成:我学了八个月的汉语,这样更简洁)。在北京的时候,我是北京大学的留学生。北京大学有点儿难(有点儿难意思不明确,是指北京大学学习的难度高吗)。可是在北京大学我学汉语学得很好(可改成:不过我在北京大学学汉语学得很好)。
北京人只说普通话。他们英语说得不太流利。因为我汉语说得不太好,所以我有时候没听懂北京人(的意思)。不过我很喜欢北京人。我觉得他们又有帮助(“有帮助”改成热心(enthusiastic))又耐心。北京人比香港人热心一些。
北京的夏天又热又潮湿。 虽然北京的天气很不舒服,但是我非常喜欢北京。北京很大, 也很有意思。有很多不同地方。那儿商场多, 公园和博物馆也多。我特别喜欢798艺术区和景山公园。从景山可以看看紫禁城。我也参观长城了。长城大有可观。漂亮极了。
因为北京东西挺便宜的,所以我买了很多东西。北京菜又便宜又好吃(“也”字删除)。我最喜欢吃北京烤鸭, 好吃极了!北京大学的餐厅比香港大学的餐厅多样多了(”多样多了”改成:菜式种类多)。我觉得北京大学的菜比香港大学的菜好吃。不过我很喜欢一边吃香港的点心一边喝香港的奶茶。
我打算再去北京旅行。我在北京的时候玩儿得很开心。我觉得北京很漂亮。在那儿我拍很多照片。0 votedMarch 9, 20190- Dear Basketball (self-introductory speech) "What do I mean to you?" This is the tenth time you have asked me the question, my lover. How many times will you keep asking me this question, my lover? A thousand times, ten thousand times or ask forever? However, no matter how many times you ask me the same question, my lover, I will never change my answer, "my dear basketball, you fulfill and sparkle my life." From the moment I held you in my little arms and shot imaginary game-winning shots in the court, I knew one thing was real: I fell in love with you, a love so deep that I gave you my all- from my mind and body to spirit and soul. As a return, the gift you gave me is the company, which has lasted for ten years. Whenever I was lonely, you were always by my side without complaint and doubt. Because of you, I became reliable and responsible. I found that when you were thrown on the ground, you would come right back up, from which I learned to be a reliable and responsible person. I played through the sweat and hurt, not because challenge called me but because you called me. You made me passionate and full of blood. Because of you, I could jump in the cold wind as well as running in the hot sun. You gave an eleven-year-old boy his basketball dream and I'll always love you for it. What excites me is that every time I hold you in my arms, there is a feeling of freshness, because of which I will love you obsessively for much longer. Fortunately, you are not only my lover but my life mentor. When I wanted to give up, you taught me that insistence led to victory. When I tempted to take shortcuts, you exhorted me that no pains, no gains. When I was afraid to compete with others, you supported and encouraged me to make me braver. What's more, you told me failure is the mother of success, which helped me put failure in perspective and pursue success industriously. Without you, I'm a frog in a well, but with you, I can see the stars in the whole sky because I am standing on the shoulders of the giant. (It hasn't been finished yet, so if you can see the rest of the speech in the response area below I will appreciate it so much!!) Thank for your correction!!March 9, 201910

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