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    轻舞飞扬's notebook entry: Jun 14, 2010



    有缘分不一定能相守,両想以不一定能白头。 ----------两想以是什么意思?

    错过的人,错过的事。已经不需要理由。

    等待命运安排下次的邂逅,相爱的人都常在梦里头。

    不爱的人都哭的说分手,越在乎越心痛。别再苦苦去守候,如果有爱你就大声说出口。

    在我心里有个你,虽然已不在一起。

    单位很在乎你的消。让我大声告诉你, --------------是不是想说“但我很在乎你的消息”?

    你一直在我心里。就算分手我也默默祝福你。

    一颗心苦苦地在等你,等着有一天我俩再相依。---在动词前面助词使用“地”发“de”的音。名词前用“的”

    告诉你生命里,你曾是我的唯一。

    让我亲口对你说声对不起。



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    limi's notebook entry: 四月 13, 2010

    繁华的错别 难忍寂寞的忧伤 一连串文字的描述 却从未掀开那凋零的秘密 蝴蝶轻轻的翻开那双写满神
    秘的翅膀 将灵动在风中画成素描 线条清晰的背景中 云儿自由的浮动 那一刻 蓝色的天空成为无际的
    光阴 每一次 阳光轻吻蔚蓝 都会有莫名的悸动 每一次 蔚蓝拥抱阳光 都会想起一种温暖 清清的河水
    将那片金色折成了星星 是谁将木桨轻轻的划动 小河又微笑着灿烂 草地上那些晶莹的露珠悄悄地抖动
    一个不小心便将光芒唱满了大地

    蓝色标出的地方用词不当。建议换词。翻开可以选用扇动、舞动、挥舞;“蓝色的天空成为无际的光阴”这句话相当低别扭!表意不明!
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    my name. my name is miao.In chinese is a word 妙. The word mean beautiful,smart,wondful.But I like the name not for this.I love the word because it sound like a kitten. I love cat,they are so lovely and funly. I had a kitten when I was a child.it was a naughty cat.it broken my cup for eat fish.This thing make my mum angry.So kitten send away. I miss it in my dream. I always hope someday it come back to my home...
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    hello! I come from hangzhou.It is a beautiful city in china.I love it! West Lake is a famous lake .I want to learn english well,not a poor english. So I am glad to chat in english. And my chinese is very well, if you want to learn chinese you can ask me.
    大家好,这是我的第一篇小作文,我来自中国杭州,这是一个美丽的城市,在这个城市里有著名的西湖。对西湖的一切我都很熟悉,因为我从小生活在西湖边。
    我想学好英语,能说一口流利正确的英语是我的梦想。如果你的英语很好,欢迎你和我聊天,另外我的中文非常好,如果学中文有不懂的可以尽管问我。
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    The first one hello! I come from hangzhou.It is a beautiful city in china.I love it! West Lake is a famous lake .
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