TODAY, WHO DID YOU MEET?

All the people we have met in life have taught us something.
A good person with you teaches you about love, the a bad person who teaches you about vigilance.
Perhaps we need to say "thank you" and cherish for many those people, simply people who smile at you or someone who spends a lot of time talking to you.
Today, I met a friend who made me smile!

I hope this helps, Cheers!

Please proofread my grammatical mistakes and tell me natural expressions

I talked about fear with a teacher at an English lesson.
That topic reminded me when I watched "Jurassic Park. " when I was a child.
My family went to see the movie by a car, and on the way home I was staring outside all the time.
Because I felt like some dinosaurs might come up and attack us and was really scared.

Now I became am an adult and I overcame some fears that I used to be make me scared.
One of them is making a mistake at work. (I'd like to think making English errors is one of them as well)
When I started working as an office worker after I graduated, I was so afraid screwing up.
It bothers bothered coworkers, and made me feel that I might be not a suitable person for this job.
But the older I am, the more nerve I have.
Now I don't care so much if I make a mistake at work, because it can happen happens.

I hope this helps! Cheers!

Part two.

I don't know why, but I wanted that Alina to get a gold medal in Saitama. May be, Maybe I wanted that because she had a hard season and she didn't became become The European champion of the figure skating in this year.
She is a kind, beautiful, modest and wise girl.
Eteri said that the preparation for The World Figure Skating Championship was too hard for her, for Alina and the Eteri team.
I wanted that Alina to be able to cope with her nerves and emotions and win this championship in Japan. She did it.
The Eteri team did this victories was victorious.

I hope this helps!! Cheers!

About hug

I want hug.

I want a hug.

I want hags.

Which is correct?

I want a hug is correct. A hag is an old, angry and/or bitter woman, lol!

IELTS Task 2

Task 2 Question:
Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. Do you agree or disagree？

In most of countries, the education system mainly support from is mainly supported by the government. while Private schools maintain from  have more expensive tuitions, private organizations and acquire less resources by the ministry.
Some people opine that parents who send their children to private school should be exempt from tax for education because they pay higher tuition to for private schools. I completely disagree with this belief conception.

First of all, a part of some parents who send their children to private schools are higher tax payers. No doubt, it’s unreasonable If they reduce taxes however the extremely financial gap it would be supplying from cause for other people, included those who may pay lower taxes and attend in public school.

No matter who are is from the higher class, middle class and or lower class, either all citizens who attend private schools or public schools should pay the tax taxes to contribute to enhancing the education system of the country.

For instance,Taiwan has a more flexible relative policy. Calculating both parents salary below average revenue, Parents whose salary is calculated as below average they can get better rate of loan loan rates from banks. If one more child attends in private schools,  their tax rate will be reduced. Everyone needs to pay taxes to enhance and promote education, even they’re not rich.

I hope this helps. I wasn't exactly sure how to correct the second sentence in the second paragraph. Hopefully, others will chime in. 
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Thank you in advance.