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I have not written a notebook entry for a long time and today I feel like writting one. After one and a half months of working using the English language, I can say that I thought that I would be able to speak more fluid fluently quickly, but I was wrong. I can practice with my co-workers and the customers, but our conversations are always about the same things. I'm very busy every day selling and refilling restocking the shelves.
My friend javier, I would like to point out a few things to you as I correct your entry.
1. *Notebook* used by itself is a noun and one cannot write a *notebook*.
You can, however, write or make a *notebook entry*
2. You should say *FOR A LONG TIME* and not *for long* since we are talking about a large period of time that you haven't written anything.
3. FLUID AND FLUENTLY ARE TWO DIFFERENT WORDS. When used as a noun *FLUID* is a liquid like water, juice, etc. As an adjective *fluid* in one example can mean <em>smooth</em>, <em>relaxed</em> and <em>graceful as*Her dance movements were very fluid*. FLUENTLY on the other hand means being able to speak a language very well.</em>
4. You should use the verb *Restock* instead of *Refill* since the verb refill has the idea of putting something again into a container to make it full, for example " <em>Maria refilled the kettle and put it on to boil to make more tea for her guests</em>", but in your example you should say "Restocking the shelves" since the verb means to <em>bringing in more supplies to replace those that have been sold or used.</em>
0 votedJanuary 5, 20131I'm Alex
Hello!
My name is Alex and I´m from Mexico. I'm an English teacher here in Mexico at a private elementary school. <strike>and</strike> I also participated as a Spanish teaching assitant last year in Wisconsin USA. <strike>so</strike> Any questions about Spanish you may have, feel free to ask me. I can help!
I would like to have international friends!0 votedApril 27, 20110Today
Today was my first day <strike>in</strike> back to work after a week off. <strike>almost complete</strike>, I was feeling <strike>a</strike> rather misplaced; but after a few hours, I was feeling <strike>Ok</strike> better.
The phone was ringing, someone was talking to me <strike>in</strike> on msn, <strike>some one alse</strike> someone else was waiting for me <strike>in</strike> at the door- all at the same time; and I thought to myself, "my day is <strike>starting</strike> just beginning"
<strike>At least</strike> All things considered, [ an adverb that means <em>"after all or taking all things into account"</em> ] <strike>THANKS</strike> THANK GOD for my job and all He gives me daily.0 votedApril 27, 20111- Jonpierre's notebook entry: Jun 03, 2010 Hola a todos. Mi nombre is Roberto. Tengo cincuenta y tres años y soy casado desde hace quatorce años. Tengo dos niños, un hijo and una hija. Vivo en Trinidad que está en el Mar caribe sólo de la costa del norte de Venezuela en América del Sur. Quiero aprender español porque voy a enseñar Ingles a los estudiantes de Venezuela. En este caso, es importante de saber español. Mi objetivo es hablar español con fluidez.June 3, 201060
