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  • Corrected

    Perfect!Needs a little revisement.

    我的"联系我们"页面上的文字

    我创建了一个新的社区协会(this word is equal to a more often use)社团:美中友好协会。这是“联系我们”页面上的文字:

    "协会会员自动收到有关即将举行的活动的电子邮件(express this in english so I can understand better , pleeeeease?)请考虑加入!
    如果你不想加入但希望收到该电子邮件,请单击此处。在联系表格上,请告诉我们你希望收到有关(that's very formal)关于即将举办的活动的电子邮件。"

    请帮我纠正语法错误!谢谢你们!
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    March 19, 2019
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    restructured & refined --College Students better chose a relatively broad range of subjects I believe it's better that college students choose a relatively broad range of subjects. It is true that this will cost some depth of understanding and competence on a few subjects. But the benefit will make up for the cost. It exposes students to ways of thinking and problem solving used in different fields. Students will be more creative and will be more at ease when they need to work with experts from various fields. So I prefer a relatively broad range.
    March 18, 2019
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    Audience Effect The way we interact with each other influence our behavior. The sheer precence of one person could bring about audience effect to the other person. In this lace tieing experiment the observed students who knew they were being observed tied their laces faster because of the audience effec. And when people are observed, they tend to do better and they make mistakes even faster, as in the typing task.
    March 17, 2019
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  • Corrected

    very beutiful work! could be better with a little more practice!


    电脑我是100美元买的

    电脑我是100美元买的. 我买这台电脑花了100美元。
    我是今天下午12点学的中文. (Not able to understand. Original English please?)
    我会用中文写电邮了. 我是去年学会的.
    我每天都是开车来*大学上课的.
    我去过了旧金山的中国城(China Town = 唐人街). 我是今天早上7点去的.

    你在北京待多久了?
    他们整晚都在跳舞吗?
    美国大学生经常去运动场踢足球,有时去健身房做运动。
    我只需要使用用(用 is less formal)这个汉英词典几分钟。
    他戒烟了,不再熬夜了。


    *if you are in or close to the university you use 来,if you are far away from the university you use 去。

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    March 17, 2019
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    eliminating bus centers v.s. building parking lots The man thinks it should be made easier to take buses, rather than cars, to go to the university by the management. The first reason is that he thinks the routes are wrong because they only go through expensive neighborhoods, and that's why few students take the bus. And the second reason is that he thinks that adding parking lots is encouraging more car using and this is leading to more noises and more traffic, and this is bad.
    March 16, 2019
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  • Corrected

    good job!

    演藝和政府談判破局了

    生字:破局, 出入, 兩敗俱傷, 演藝, 延後,關涉,畫家

    大家留意:如下都是虛構的!

    最近政府跟演藝機構開會,討論演員和畫家的稅率。雖然一些演員和藝人是富有的,但是(”但是” usually go with "虽然")大多數演員和藝人的收入很低,大部分爲了過生活要兼職,一邊做普通的工作一邊做演藝的工作。很可惜演藝機構跟政府的談判破局了,原因是政府代表以爲有名演員的工資跟普通的演員沒有很大的出入,因此雙方達不成協議,下一輪談判延後了。這件事關涉雙方,也是一個兩敗俱傷的狀態:藝人不開心,而且因爲藝人對政府有反感會瞞隐瞒自己真正的收入,免得付稅。
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    March 15, 2019
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    College students need to choose a broader range of subjects. I believe it's better that students in college choose relatively a broader range of subjects, because when they head into the society, they need to deal with way more complex tasks than what they did in college. They need to cooperate with all kinds of experts. They need to know a little about everything to communicate with them, and to have a compatible interface with those experts to make things done.
    March 15, 2019
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  • Corrected

    very beautiful work,! but will be better if you correct a some spots. Scentences redded as a whole for you better understand my correction in a context, and it doesn't mean you're wrong with the whole scentence.


    今天的天气很奇怪,早上雹暴了,下午有阳光

    今天的天气很奇怪,早上雹暴了下冰雹,下午有阳光转晴并然后晚上下了雨又下雨,真的奇怪,特别是昨天一整天都有阳光。幸好在我回家的时候,没有遇到雹暴冰雹或下雨或者雨,好棒唷!

    我刚才练习写汉字,我以为了我手写一个汉字对的,但我注意到我总是写错了有些字(some characters)我以为写对了(I thought I wrote them right),但我注意到实际上(actually, need this word to make the sentence more comprehensible)我一直(always)是错的,所以我要继续练习手(delete this)写汉字,虽然有时候有点难,但是我觉得这是(delete this)很有趣啊!

    上个星期我们吃了台湾的特别特色蛋糕,有芋头填充(could you write that out in English?),好好吃,其实在我听听到芋头的时候,我总是记住到想起,在第一次听过"芋头"在我第一次听到“芋头”的时候我觉得他们说关于"鱼头"我觉得他们在说“鱼头”,哈哈,所以在我听了"麻薯跟芋头(鱼头)填充"听到"麻薯跟芋头(鱼头)填充"的时候,我的脸表情看起来好像在说:"唉呀,这样听起来非常不好吃啦!",哈哈哈。

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    March 14, 2019
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    A place important to me--a more logical version Every evening, I go to the bank of the Pearl River for a five-kilometer run. It is important to me because it makes my run easier. The first reason is that the air there is super clean and it cheers me up. The second reason is that the scenery there is soul-striking and I will never get bored appreciating the view. The third reason is that there are many people working out there during this period, so my heart gets warmed by so much accompany. In a word, this river helps a lot with my running, so I love it.
    March 12, 2019
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    A place important to me--a second freestyle In the evening, I often go to the bank of the Pearl River to have a run. It is important to me because it refreshes my body. There're many trees there, and the water is massive and the air is very clean. And the second reason is that it refreshes my mind, because when I'm running, I meditate, that will make my mind clearer. With a beautiful river in sight, a five kilo run won't feel that boring.
    March 11, 2019
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