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Anna Sehal
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Dec 2, 2021
Es macht mir einen großen Spaß, mit Alex zu kommunizieren. Sie ist sich darüber bewusst und ganz präzis, wie sie ihren Lernprozess organisieren kann und strebt nach dem Ziel, die Prüfung zu bestehen. Sehr angenehm, sie kennenzulernen.
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    An imaginary story #6

    When I first saw this dress in a flea market, I thought it was likely going to be my best purchase ever. So, even though it cost much <s style="color: rgb(0, 102, 204);">higher</s> more than what I would have expected from <s style="color: rgb(0, 102, 204);">the</s> this kind of <s style="color: rgb(0, 102, 204);">the</s> thing (you need to use THIS because you are referring directly to this particular dress), I brought it home <s style="color: rgb(0, 102, 204);">with a</s> full of happiness. Well, back then, <s style="color: rgb(0, 102, 204);">actually</s> I would have actually fooled myself into thinking that it was way cheaper than the new one. But the satisfaction didn't last long. Soon I found why it <s style="color: rgb(0, 102, 204);">turned</s> ended up on the small market (sounds more casual). How come the dress has some buttons to <s style="color: rgb(0, 102, 204);">do up on the back of it </s>zip it up at the back? They are positioned <s style="color: rgb(0, 102, 204);">where</s> in a way, in which I can't <s style="color: rgb(0, 102, 204);">only</s> button up well <s style="color: rgb(0, 102, 204);">but also</s> and can barely reach (them when I'm in it) (You tried to complicate the sentence too much. There is no need). So, even though I scarcely wear it, I'<s style="color: rgb(0, 102, 204);">ve had</s> have to ask someone around me to do up the buttons whenever I try to put it on. Wearing it has been getting more and more stressful. Eventually, I've decided<s style="color: rgb(0, 102, 204);"> to</s> not to bother with the buttons (The buttons are particular, you need to use ''the'') <s style="color: rgb(0, 102, 204);"> since last party</s> and I'm planning to put it up online for selling<s style="color: rgb(0, 102, 204);"> it somehow</s>.


    Very very nice try! You would generally get your idea across to an English speaker, but there are always ways to improve. Keep up the good work!
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    October 10, 2019
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    10/11｜Does this sound natural? Please correct me if my English is wrong.

    Q: What book do you recommend? (It sounds a bit stiff and straightforward, not natural and polite. Try something like ''What book WOULD you recommend?'' or ''Have you read any good books that you would recommend?'')

    A: The Miyuki Miyabe. <s style="color: rgb(0, 102, 204);">Novels she wrote</s> Her novels always take me into the story's world. It feels like reality. I think her <s>writing way</s> way of writing is similar <s style="color: rgb(0, 102, 204);">it</s> to the script of movies or TV dramas, so it can be <s style="color: rgb(0, 102, 204);">imaging quickly </s>quick for us to feel the situation.


    Hello!
    You did a pretty good job and an English speaker would generally understand what you're trying to say. However, be careful with your articles (a, the), don't forget to put a subject in your sentence (It feels like reality) and keep practicing!
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    October 10, 2019
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    The Days When I Was "Abandoned"

    I lived alone since I was twelve. At that time, I thought there was no love and warmth in this world.
    On September 1th, I was sent to the county's middle school. After arranging the daily necessities for me, my parents, then, left the rental house.
    Night fell; fear rose. Sure enough, it was a sleepless night and that was just the beginning. The door was battling with the powerful wind and the window rattled noisily as if trembling with scare. I knew very little about life; for a moment, I felt I was abandoned.
    What’s more devastating was, on the third day <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">when</s> I went back home—more specifically a shelter, by no means a home in the eyes of a twelve year old—I found my key was gone. Being sure that there was no key in my pockets, I then fumbled in my backpack, but it likewise, didn’t show a trace of the key. Seized with <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">desperate </s>desperation (you need the NOUN, not the ADJECTIVE) , I wept, sitting feebly on the staircase <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">in </s>of/at/by front of the door. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">One</s> A voice was lingering in my head, “Now, you damn house are desert<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</s>ing me (you need present continuous), too.”

    Amazing imagination and great attempt with English!
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    October 5, 2019
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    an imaginary conversation #1

    As for I train to express myself better, I've just made up an imaginary conversation below.

    what's going on? why did Peter call you in such <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">an</s> anger? did you hide something from me? do you remember <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">what</s> that I always advise following to avoid falling out with your friend? That is, if you did something wrong or made a mistake, it's always better to just be honest with yourself and admit and apologize. but when to do it (it refers to ''to apologise'') is also important as much as the apology itself. So, at this time, I guess <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">you</s> it would be better to wait for a week until he gets chillax. He sounded <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">to be</s> really upset earlier when you talked on the phone. I think <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">Nothing to do</s> to do nothing would be a better strategy than anything else <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">right away</s>. but by the time you'll try, he could be even worse if he is so sensitive about the weather. Because forecasts are saying it's going to keep raining next week.


    Very nice try! Keep up the good work.
    (The yellow words are not clear.)
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    October 5, 2019
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    Ισπανία 🇪🇸

    Γειά σου. Πάω στην Ιταλία <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">αργότερα ότι ήταν τρία εβδομάδα</s> μετά από τρεις εβδομάδες στην Ισπανία για Ερασμους. Ισπανία είναι πολύ καλά και υπάρχουν <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">πόλι</s> πολλοί (plural/πληθυντικός αριθμός) φιλικοί άνθρωποι, τώρα έχω φίλους στην Ισπανία και στην Ελλάδα!! Είναι ωραίο!! Εύχομαι να μπορέσω θα ζήσω εδώ η εκεί. Επέστρεψα στην Ιταλία για λίγο (=for a little bit) και τώρα επιστροφή στη Ισπανία με τη Συρία, αυτής είναι η ψευδείς αδελφή μου, της αρέσει να βλέπει (=she likes TO see) <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">νέο χώρα </s>νέες χώρες (plural), και εγώ επίσης! Ας ελπίσουμε να <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">σου</s> της αρέσει και αυτής η Ισπανία

    (the sentence in yellow is not clear enough)
    A very good attempt at writing in Greek! Συνέχισε έτσι!
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    October 5, 2019
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