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    summer school! Yesterday afternoon, I recieved the notice of the summber school from our class's wechat group. Since our university has coorperation with some universities overseas every year, now we have a chance to sign up for summer courses in Tufts University or Willian and Mary College which means I can study abroad for about a month. Even though I have been waiting and planning for this for a long time, I still hesitated about whether to participate it or not and which school should I choose. I have never been abroad before and can only get to know some profiles of America or Britan in TV series. So I think it would be a great opportunity for me to broaden my horizons in an unfamiliar counrtry with experience of other cultures and beautiful scenery. And I'd like to know what the difference is in the area of education between China and America which has been a hot topic in our discussions. However, I have some concerns about this summer school project. English is an essential class in our education system while oral English is never an important part in school even in university. I hardly speak or write English automatically. But if I go abroad to take courses, not only speaking and communicating with native speakers is necessary, but reading and writing paper or essay in English is also a basic skill. I really don't have confidence in my English especially my oral English. Well, before all these excitement and concerns, I haven't submit the registration table...But I really hope I can grab this chance to improve myself in language skills as well as the courage of changing my life.
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    请大家检查一下吧）））

    我是一个伊尔库茨克人。大部分<strike>我的生活</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">（时间），</font>我住在<strike>一片（</strike>那个）很有名的贝加湖旁边<strike>了</strike>。当地的人称呼<font style="background-color: yellow;">为</font>它《父老尔》。一直到现在，父老儿湖给人们<strike>送</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">（带来）</font>干净的水、好吃的鱼、漂亮的风景。1961年湖岸上 <strike>被 </strike>建造了一座纸浆造纸联合工厂。因为大部分环境污染是由工业生产活动造成的，所以许多人<strike>们</strike>为它的停工而奋斗<strike>了</strike>。过了几十年，终于，2013年<strike>被</strike>总统命<font style="background-color: yellow;">令</font>它停工了。目前<strike>在</strike>这儿是国家的自然保护区。去年<strike>留</strike>在上海的时候，<strike>我得了中国保护环境的知</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">我得知中国在提倡保护环境</font>。国家<strike>划出</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">划拨</font>资金为把北苏州河从生态灾难中<strike>就</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">（救）</font>出来。如今河里的水干净得多了，人们<font style="background-color: yellow;">能</font>在美丽的河沿街上散散步。国家为<font style="background-color: yellow;">了</font>城市的空气净化，提倡用充电电池，所以大部分上海人用电池摩托车。在商店里，人<font style="background-color: yellow;">们</font>很少用一次<font style="background-color: yellow;">性</font>用品。<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">随着对生活越来越多的了解</font>，我清楚得明白了－我们的命运由我们自己掌握，改变要靠我们自己。保护环境是世界上每一个人都<font style="background-color: yellow;">面对</font>的问题。保护你的环境吧！
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    保护环境的问题

    对人类来说，我们是世界上最聪明的物种。<strike>但是</strike>在我们的地球上没有别的危害自然的物种/<font style="background-color: yellow;">（没有别的物种会危害自然）</font>。为了生活（生存），每个人要呼吸，还要喝水。但是有些地区的森林已经被人砍光了，很多河流被污染了。总之<font style="background-color: yellow;">（的）</font>来说/<font style="background-color: yellow;">（总之）</font>，现在是我们会<font style="background-color: yellow;">（要）</font>改变的时间（时候），为了保护环境作<font style="background-color: yellow;">（做）</font>出贡献。


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    一篇用汉语练习造句的文章 二零一九年二月十二日 第四个

    耐心            nàixīn        patient; patience
    起来            qǐlai / Qilai. Upwards; up; to become; start; expressing preliminary judgement; indicating the beginning and continuation of an action or state
    矮                 ǎi                short (of stature) low; low grade
    笔记本         bǐjìběn       notebook
    变化             biànhuà    change; variation; to change; vary
    短                  duǎn          short; brief (opp. 长）
    lack; owe; weak point; fault

    宋先生在耐心地等待他<font style="background-color: yellow;">的</font>妻子准备<strike>好了</strike>。


    除了耐心地等待验血的结果以外，别的办法都没有。（as a native speaker I would say 没有别的办法）

    我<font style="background-color: yellow;">的</font>孩子们喜欢很早叫醒我。太阳起来<strike>了</strike>之前，我经常已经起床<font style="background-color: yellow;">了</font>。

    戴先生从桌子上把他<font style="background-color: yellow;">的</font>钱包拿起来。

    我爷爷又矮又胖。

    在这栋房子周围，有一个矮墙。

    我上传我<font style="background-color: yellow;">的</font>练习文章在Italki上 后，总是在我<font style="background-color: yellow;">的</font>笔记本<font style="background-color: yellow;">上</font>写我<font style="background-color: yellow;">的</font>文章。

    <strike>在</strike>这张书桌<font style="background-color: yellow;">上</font>，有一些不同颜色的笔记本。

    她去中国旅游之前，需要把一些美元变化<font style="background-color: yellow;">（兑换）</font>成人民币。

    从<strike>她</strike>成为一个青少年起，<font style="background-color: yellow;">她</font>对自己父母的态度变化了。

    他们的关系很短。只持续了三个月<strike>份</strike>。

    我<font style="background-color: yellow;">的</font>孩子们每晚去<font style="background-color: yellow;">（上）</font>床以前，我给她们<strike>阅</strike>读一个故事。


    我觉得你造的句子很棒！中文语法对于非母语学习者来说比较复杂，甚至对汉语专业的母语者来说也是这样。你造的句子已经表达出你想要表达的基本意思，但是选择的语法和词汇不是特别准确，尤其是句子时态和“的”的灵活使用方面。

    你可以试着多阅读一些中文来培养语感，我觉得这是个学着像母语者一样写或说的好方法。

    I think the sentences you made is great! Chinese grammar is  complicated for non-native learners even for native speakers who major in Chinese language in university. In the sentences you made, the basic meaning you want to express  has been expressed. But the grammar and words you choose are not so accurate especially the tenses in the sentences and the flexible use of the character ”的“.

    Maybe you could try to read more Chinese to cultivate the sense of this language which I think would be a good way to write or speak like a native speaker.

    Hope you can keep practice and make progress !

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