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TOP 5 MISTAKES MADE BY NOVICE LANGUAGE LEARNERS
1. They don’t start practicing speaking at the very beginning of language learning. You can't say much, and that's okay, but you need to start with simple sentences, because that's the foundation that will help you speed up and talk about details later.
2. They don't fill their daily routine with English.
3. They take too many pauses between classes. This does not mean that you need to study with tutors 5 times a week, self-study is enough, during which you can do listenings, exercises, watch videos or communicate with foreigners.
4. They study without a structured approach and devote a lot of time only to grammar. A balance between speaking, reading, writing and listening is necessary to get the best results.
5. They apply too much effort and burn out quickly. You need to remember that learning a language is a marathon, not a short-distance run. You can accelerate, but you need to adequately assess your strengths and remember to take care of yourself.