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Hey,I am zora.I like travelling very much and like meeting different people and learning about different cultures.
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    Children's Day When I’m angry, I usually hungry,so,i will eat a lot of things.This situation occurred again yesterday.But sad is not the center of my life,when I get a hot shower and a good night's sleep. I will come back to life again.It's Children's Day today. I will be happy like a child……
    June 1, 2010
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    奥黛丽,我亲爱的… (3/3)

    我在部队<strike>花了</strike>一共待了362天。虽然距离兵役最后一天,望眼欲穿的那一刻一天比一天近,但弄倒计时还是<strike>总是</strike>一种折磨,日子简直不计其数。时间过得很漫长,<strike>路上</strike>也无捷径可走,只好尽最大努力做一个好兵。这样一来,那盼望已久的,好像永远摸不着的一天悄悄地<strike>鬼鬼祟祟</strike>就来了。

    那一天,感觉倒是没有想的那么快乐<strike>欢乐</strike>,心情忽然复杂得很。我是出正门的最后一个人。一走<strike>闯</strike>出来,我才明白,再也无法进去,那个地方再也不欢迎我。一帮战友还在门前面徘徊不定,都露出一种找不着北的神情。我们在兵营的影子下送别,边压制自己的感情,边说再见,最后一次握<strike>个</strike>手<strike>就算了</strike>。我<strike>还</strike>站在那里,呆了一会儿,默默望着战友们远去的身影。太阳从西边出来了——那个讨厌的笼子在我心里变成了一个恋恋不舍的地方!终于逃出来,我却浑身<strike>就</strike>充满了一种无家可归的感觉。

    当然,我不被允许带奥黛丽走,所以我与它不情愿地离了婚。

    回家了,继续在大学念本科,生活又像以往那么滋润。随后的一段时光,反倒遇到了一种前所未有的空虚感。不久以后,当兵的日子渐渐淡忘了,只有当几个老战友聚在一起的时候,才敢把那些事情摆在桌面上谈一谈。谈了一夜,我们也不得不承认,一切已经属于过去,一去不复返;最好往前看,开始新生活<strike>改过自新</strike>。现在回忆起来,能记起的细节<strike>详细情况</strike>越来越少,其实只有一些遥遥远远的回忆:仿佛是在另一个世界,在另一个时代发生的事情。把这些碎片拼起来,很快<strike>一小会儿</strike>就会<strike>能</strike>回到自己的“光荣之日(岁月)”中去。

    我偶尔<strike>或</strike>还纳闷,当兵经验对我的影响到底怎么样?我还是同一个人吗?至少我觉得自己的胆子比以前大一点,我在军队吃的苦毕竟不少。还有就是,服完了役,我有一阵子死也不肯穿绿色的衣裳。

    仔细一想,我依然是同一个人。返回大学,我又陷入了书呆子的三点一线的生活,房间图书馆餐厅,不是读书就是睡觉。平时运动得越来越少,接触的人也越来越少,与战友的关系也日渐疏远。这样快三年了,难怪看自己镜子里的样子时,那个骄傲的战士已经完全看不见了。除了冷漠的神情以外,军人的风度早就没有了。

    末了,奥黛丽一定再婚了,情场得意,同时我找对象却都是失败。亲爱的,我能不吃醋吗…

    嗨,说远了!已写得够多了。希望这篇短文能够说明,我为什么把当兵的时光看作我人生中至今印象最深刻的一次冒险。那一年的经历至少把我的冒险范畴扩大了一些。大部分快忘掉了,连奥黛丽都不是忘不了的;有的事情却深深地印在我的脑海里,念念不忘。

    我好像是把自己的一部分丢在那些幽深的森林里似的……


    PS:找不着北一般都用在口语中,书面语可用茫然
            太阳从西边出来了也是口语

    汉语学得很好,写作用情很深,是篇好文章,你也是个好同志
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    May 27, 2010
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    zora的小作文: May 22, 2010 I'm thinking of a trip.No destiny, No destination
    May 22, 2010
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    鸭血粉丝汤
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    May 22, 2010
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    May 22, 2010
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    listen I find listening really hard in English.Sometimes it's just impossible to understand.Maybe I need lots of practice.A friend told me can listen to China Radio International or BBC English programmes on the net.That's a good idea! There are lots of good English language programmes on net,such as The VOA Special English.It is a great help to learners of English.
    May 21, 2010
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    zora的小作文: May 20, 2010 The life is limited,and the death is no period.So I don't want waste it living someone else's life.The noise of others' opinions drown out my own inner voice.I need the courage to follow my heart and intuition.They already know what i want to become. Everything else is secondary. Me first,others second !
    May 20, 2010
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    The traditional Chinese holidays Today, I want to talk about the traditional Chinese holidays. I think we can start from the Spring Festival. As everyone knows,Spring Festival is the most important festival in China . Before the New Year comes, the people completely clean the indoors and outdoors of their homes as well as their clothes, bedclothes and all their utensils. The night before the Spring Festival is called the New Year's Eve, on which the people would make dumplings while watching TV and chatting with each other instead of sleeping. All the door panels will be pasted with Spring Festival couplets.On New Year' s Eve the display of fireworks offers many attractions. Children like the festival very much ,because they can have delicious food and wear new clothes .They can also get some money from their parents. This money is given to children for good luck. Maybe there are three “F” about festival :family ;fun and food。
    May 19, 2010
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    Where do you want to live?——The city or The countryside ? Where do you want to live?——city or countryside ?Maybe it is a difficult question for quite a few people .They cann’t decide where to live.In city , we will have convenient communications, it’s very convenient to work ; good medical condition, good living facilities,there have many supermarket. The city itself brings more chance for commercial development, And many famous universities in different cities. In country ,here is different from city。There have fresh air and fresh food . There have good environment, People's feelings in there very pleasant.One coin have two sides.Live in the city or countryside, It's up to you !
    May 18, 2010
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    Internet Along with the rapid economic development and the improvement of science and technology,network began to develop and popularization,more and more people have PC ,and many things became easy and convenient .For example,people can find many movies,they can see a movie in their home.Because we have the chance to use the Internet, so,we can chat with many different people in different chat rooms,contact different cultures.Read other people's world ,and reacquainted ourselves. This is very interesting.
    May 17, 2010
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