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Hi, I'm Bez and I'm a part-time English tutor (here on italki), and part-time tabletop games designer.
Currently I'm not looking to do language exchanges, I'm too busy teaching and working on my games business.
Sorry, no language exchanges at the moment.
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- Some people don't care about where to stay while their journey (I'd change this to "while they travel", but "while on their journey" also works), they put their budget on ("spend their budget on" would be more normal, but you could say "put their budget towards") food and sights. But I think accommodation (no need for 'the' here, it's not a specific one) is very important during the journey (I'd say either "during a journey", it's not a specific journey, or "when travelling". I prefer to staying (either "I prefer to stay" or "I prefer staying") in a safe area and close to the main sights, so that I can safe (this should be the verb "save", not the adjective "safe") time on road. If I travel alone, I prefer to booking (either "I prefer to book" or "I prefer booking") a hotel, (it's okay as is, but I'd probably add "because" or "as" here, to make it clear the bit that follows is the reason why) I feel it's safer. But if I travel with others, Airbnb (as is, it looks like you're saying the company/website "Airbnb" is better, if you change it to "an Airbnb" it would be saying you think one of the properties on there is better) is a better choice, (again, a "because or "as" would be good here) you can get a cheaper price (it's not technically wrong, but we tend to either just say something is "cheaper" of has a "lower price") with more space, and normally there is a kitchen, so you can cook sometimes to safe (should be "save") some money.0 votedApril 5, 20243
- "What is your favorite Turkish Series?" - you don't need the upper-case 'S', the word 'series' is just a regular noun here, not a proper noun. "Write below the name." - I'd swap the word order a bit to "Write the name below." We tend to say what we want them to do, then where.0 votedJanuary 17, 20240
- I'm really into JRPGs. (plural) Actually, I 've been playing a Japanese (capital letter for nationalities) RPG game called Tale of Arise recently. The creators of the game have made a staggering amount of money, as it's selling well. The setting of the game is not unusual. Back in the day, there were two distinct nations: Dehna and Rena. (no changes) But very soon Rena invaded Dehna by ('by' is correct if the invasion was via 'Deehna's advanced tech, but it should be 'with' it Rena used its advanced tech to attack) its advanced technologies. Dehna's (they're the people belonging to Dehna) people were suppressed and widely used as slaves to harvest a sort of mysterious (spelling) mineral (spelling) for Rena, (comma added to clarify clauses) underground. The story begins with the protagonists (spelling) fighting against Rena after (changed so it's the protagonists who were working, not Rena) working as a forced labor for a year. As opposed to another recent released RPG Elden Ring, it is a lot more casual and easier (spelling) to master. The combat system is all about stacking up hits. In other words, the more times I strike enemies in a row, the more damage I inflict. (no issues) Such a simple mechanic, right? (also fine)0 votedMarch 25, 20221
- First sentence: "Global warming is incredibly growing up nowadays perhaps because of cutting down plants and excessive usage of carbon foot print." Okay, so firstly, 'growing up' is a phrasal verb that refers to becoming an adult, not simply getting bigger. You mean 'growing', not 'growing up'. Secondly, to say something is 'incredibly growing' wouldn't be quite right either. You can say something is 'growing incredibly rapidly' or 'growing at an incredible rate'. Thirdly, someone's 'carbon footprint' (typically 'footprint' is one word) is the amount of CO2 they're responsible for, not a thing they use. So, that could use re-wording. I'd also put a comma between 'nowadays' and 'perhaps', to separate the statement and the speculation. Second sentence: "The problems we are encountering such as unhealthy environment, and worst impact of technology in our daily life." This isn't particularly clear what you're saying. Currently it's along the lines of "The problems (such as X & Y)." It's not clear whether you want to say "The problems are X & Y" or "The problems (such as X & Y) are doing something". Also, when you say "...and worst impact of technology..." that isn't quite right. You could be talking about 'the worst impact' of it, but then you don't actually mention what that is. Or, you could be saying that the impact of technology is 'worse' than an unhealthy environment, in which case replace the 'worst' with either "worse is the" or "worse, the".0 votedMarch 12, 20220
- Overall, not too bad, I can understand it, but there are several minor errors. "I have a new school." - Quite a short sentence, but perfectly good. "I haven’t see it know." - I'm not sure exactly what you mean here, but I think with the 'know' might mean 'now'. If so, I'd go with "I haven't seen it yet." "I always look forward to seeing it, I often fantasize my school life." - You fatasize about things, so the second part should be "I often fantasize about my school life." (Unless you mean that you make up things about your actual school life). "Listening form the network," - I'm guessing the 'form' is a typo and you meant 'from', however you hear things from someone, but you listen to someone, so I'd change that to "Listening to". It's also not that clear who or what "the network" is, is that the Internet, your friends, etc.? "my school has big lake,it about 2000mu," - Should be "my school has a big lake", don't forget the 'a'. The second part should be "it's" or "it is", not just 'it'. The 'mu' isn't a unit I'm familiar with. I'm guessing you mean "m²". ""we can take bus go to the classroom." - To fix this grammatically, we need to change this to "We can take a bus to go to the classroom." (You could also have 'the bus'). That implies the bus is taking you more or less right to the classroom, so if it's a big enough campus you're using a bus to get around it, that's fine, but if you're just using a bus to get from outside the school to the school, then we'd probably not say that. "In my campus,will have many different club." - "club" needs to be 'clubs' as there's more than one. Also the wording isn't quite right. Either "In my campus, there will be many different clubs." or "My campus will have many different clubs." Hope that helps.0 votedJuly 15, 20211
- It's a metaphorical use of the word. If you were listening to a radio broadcast, static would be interference, causing crackling that would distract from the sound you're listening for. In this sentence, the static would be something that's not helpful and is distracting. Likely non-constructive criticism, or pointless distraction.0 votedJune 8, 20210

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