Could you help to check my sentences?-The second story. Thanks you very much I'd like to tell everyone about my route to office today. Last night, i slept too late because my six-months daughter only want to play, not sleep. For this reason, i waked up lately at 7 o'clock. But early today, i had an important appointment with partners. Having no another way, i hastily ate breakfast with the hands.Next ten minutes, i got out my home, jumped and drived my motorcycle as fastest as possible. In Hanoi winter day, it was ten degrees and too much fog. Route became wet and glide. It was easy to create accidents if we were not carefull. When i wen the rout, in a sudden, i hear a terrible broken sound. I thought a accident had appeared. The flocks who were driving on the route reduced their speed. When i passed where the accident happened, i saw a inert body behind a couple rest part of his vehicle. "Be carful, if today the person in the accident, who take care your family". Those words were in my mind. I slow down my speed and drove to my office carefully. 8 o'clock, i arried my office in safe. Now, i decide to change my schedule to get out earlier. By this way, i do not have to join traffic hurriedly with high risk. As you know, many foreigner talk about taking part in Vietnamese traffic is the same venture game and we do not know what happen in front of direction.

Could you help to check my sentences? thanks you very much Next month, Vietnamese will welcome Tet holiday. This holiday is one of the most important Vietnamese holiday. In this vacation, people who work or study far away home will come back their home. We give up daily boring and concern to give each other smile. So Tet mean familiar and warmly feeling with Vietnamese. Before this holiday, we are going to make up our house. We will clean and decorate my house by words pictures which wish something such as lucky, health, success or wealth. We also plant tree or buy flowers. There are many types of flowers represent Tet holiday depending area. The north is "đào" flower, the south is "mai" flower. a special type of Tet holiday food is Chung cake. It's filling is made of rice, pig meat, core of bean with a bit enough ingredients such as salt, pepper, "nước mắm" the liquid what made by couteing and fermenting fish in salt for a long time. All of them have to be covered by "dong" leaves what are from a type of tree like banana. It have square shape. We will boil it for more 8 hours. After finishing, we will peel it's cover. it's color is green. My ancestors think that it represent the land and with the color of tree. There are many other interesting things about Tet holiday. I hope have many opportunities to introduce everyone.

Ha noi - a new fog city Recently days, Ha Noi look like as Silent Hill what is a name of horor American film. Because the weather is very wet, joining traffic becomes hardly and to be crowed. You are late in going to office or school if you do not go earlier.

Trying learning English Hi everyone. I have a rarely good job. But it is better and more income if my english skill is good. i have tried to learn English sometimes but i ussually give up. My listening and speaking skill is very poor. Today, when i read online newspaper. I see this web and find out a old japanese man. He is 70 years old but he still try to learn English and Vietnamese. I feel so sad. I am going to practice English more in this web.