It is an important topic and an extremely common one in any society, keep going.
Great writing👍 but, here is how I think it would be better.
Sometimes you can feel like depressed <strike>a symptom of depression</strike>. You may <strike>can</strike> be upset of doing things you don't like or you can't find the way of your life. It isn't simple period of life and you should live it despite anything <strike>of something</strike>. Try to live better than yesterday, keep the goals and be grateful for your life.
