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    After-school Games

    When (<s>i </s>) I was <s>(i )</s> a child after <s>(the)</s> school( i) I liked to play <s>diferent</s> different games about: <s>Shotting</s> shooting,fighting, arcading and running, etc <s>and many others</s>.

    I <s>can</s> feel it<s> how</s> as if it was yesterday. There were games like Black. It is about <s>shotting</s> shooting <s>in </s>the first person <s>that. </s>I liked it because there were different kinds of scenarios, enemies, challenges, with different kinds of fire guns, knifes and bombs. I discovered the scenarios <s>and</s> then I fought with several enemies <s>and</s> in different places. I remember <s>of</s> the war tank, the helicopters, the warships and the jats.

    I had another kind of game that I liked very much called Guitar Hero, but <s>i dont had one kid guitar</s> didn’t have <s> to play</s> this game in my <s>console</s> Play Station Two. I just played<s> in </s> with my joy stick <s>but</s> and it was <s>very</s> very fun.

    There was one game that I played like a Street dancer but in this game I <s>had one dance mat to dance the musics</s>. It was <s>very</s> great. I loved to play it because <s>this reason in</s> it was special. <s>But</s> I used to sweat a lot <s>with</s> during this game. I felt tired <s>very</s> fast. <s> because the dance.</s>

    I didn’t like <s>the games about soccer</s> soccer games like other guys but i<s> fun myself a lot with my Video game</s> I enjoyed playing with my video games.
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    August 23, 2019
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    Bus (<s>kidnapping</s>) Hijacking

    For about 3 hours (<s>one man</s>) in Rio de Janeiro, one man was holding (<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">hostage</s>)more than thirty people hostage in (<s>one</s>)a bus.

    (<s>Anyone</s>) No one knows the motives (<s>this man</s>) behind his own action. (but after the bus kidnapping), After the Hijacking, the man was (<s>killed by one shoot</s>) shot dead in the head by police.

    All this (<s>happening</s>) happened in the bridge of Rio-niterói.While the cops were speaking with this man , (<s>was free 6 people</s>.) six people escaped.
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    August 21, 2019
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