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Make birthday
One time for (Once a) year everyone makes (has a) birthday. Some people like (it) others dislike (don't like it). Makes (having a) birthday might mean a time to celebrate, to stay close of friends, to have (receive) gifts, etc; ,but for others people might mean a time to think about life, think about the past, present and future.
About that (the) people (who) likes (to) celebrate, some people make a house party, others make a travel, or meet friends on (at) pub, on the beach, there are a lot options to have a party (celebrate)to who loves celebrate. It’s just important (to) celebrate with (what) they like. In some party (parties)there are cake, drink(,) and good person (people) to make a happy day.
Since last years (year)the parents celebrate every month the “anniversary” that your son/daughter with little parties and when him/her makes a year, the parents makes a big party. Pets have a party to celebrate his birth too and other pets go to the party to celebrate with him. In the pet party there are a cake makes (made)of pet food.
Talking about party food, in Brazil, the most common candy on every anniversary is “brigadeiro”, it’s very popular and almost every people (person)likes it. But the food isn’t just onon the stomach (just to eat), people broke (break) eggs in the hands of people , its common between the teenagers.0 votedMay 8, 20191Please,my English is correct check.
This would be:
Please check that my English is correct.
Usually the verb is in front of the noun.
We have several common area .
You can will reservation twice a month.This would be:
We have several common areas. You can reserve twice a month.
You would have to take the noun reservation and turn it into a verb. Also you do not need will in that sentence since can and will are double positives.
It’s just guest room fee but other common areas is free.This would be:
It's just a guest room fee, but other common areas is free.
For this you add a comma after fee because when you are speaking you would normally take a pause. Also it is also contrasting from the first phrase.
We have 1guest room.
It’s costs ¥2000 one night,
But extra fee ¥
We can will lent you to need electric pot.This would be:
We have one guest room. It costs ¥2000 one night, but extra ¥1000 for towels and soap. Also, we can lend you an electric pot.
One and guest should be separate word. You also do not need because in the sentence because it is already implied that it will be for the towels and soap. I would personally break it into two sentences so it does not turn into a run on sentence. With that I used the word also to show how it also includes that.
I hope this helped! And if you would like to become speaking buddies, you can message me!!
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