My friend

My old friend,lucy who has just come back from Australian. She has been Australian for ten months. Her son did not like to stay over there, so he returned half year ahead from Australian. when we had a dinner together yesterday her son complain continually wich her mother would not care for him.My son did not agree with him opinions,for my son thinks he obviously could not understand her mother's loving.


My old friend, Lucy, has just come back from Australia. She has been in Australia for ten months. Her son did not like staying there, so he returned half a year earlier from Australia. When we had dinner together yesterday, her son complained continually that her mother would not care for him. My son did not agree with his opinions, for he thinks he obviously could not understand her mother's loving.

My cousin have travelled Shanghai

My cousin have travelled Shanghai for two days,but I have not seen her, because My cousin followed travell agency all day,I asked for her to met in Shanghai south station at tonight

My cousin travelled to Shanghai for two days, but I have not seen her yet. My cousin followed a travel agency all day, so I asked for her to meet in Shanghai South station tonight.

so surprise!

Yesterday,I met my English teacher at tianzifang who had taught me with English in community centre of greenwich of Britain. I was so surprised when I found her.

Yesterday, I met my English teacher who had taught me English at the community centre of Greenwich in Britian, at Tianzifang. I was so surprized to see her.

it just rained heavily

As I <strike>have just had a walk</strike> was walking with my husband along luoxiu road,<strike>After a litter time,</strike>it suddenly began to rain<strike>ed</strike> heavily.We have stopped at a bus station <strike>to </strike>for shelter. Our clothes were full of w<strike>h</strike>ater.

As I was walking with my husband along luoxiu road, it suddenly began to rain heavily. We stopped at a bus station for shelter. Our clothes were full of water.

watched Shanghai

Yesterday,I drove car was able to sent to my son's friend to Pudong where is her relative's home .Before I go out less night, so I was astonished at what he found.Shanghai'night is very beautiful,such as neon light、buildings、bridges and EXPO etc.I think that afterwards I would often go out and have a look at nigth.

Yesterday, I drove a car to my son's friend's relatives' home in Pudong. Going out at night, I was astonished at what I saw. Shanghai's night is very beautiful with neon lights, buildings, bridges, and the EXPO. I think I will often go out and watch the night.

breakfast

Today I cooked breakfast for my family morning. Before I did not quick-freeze dumplings can be stright frieded. After visiting my best friend in Britain, I knew that how cook quick-freeze dumplings by another way

Today I cooked breakfast for my family. Before my trip to Britian, I did not straight fry quick-freeze dumplings. After visiting my best friend in Britian, I knew of another way to cook quick-freeze dumplings.

my son asked for me question yesterday

my son asked for me a lot of question about his new job yesterday."it is difficult to finish promotion report in a month"said my son.I asked him to do search market,so he got books about market from me and searched information in web last night.

My son asked me a lot of questions about his new job yesterday. " It is difficult to finish a promotion report in a month", said my son. I asked him to study markets, so he got books from me and used the web as well.

answered question

Yesterday after my son got off work,he asked me a question about medium relationship,I knew that he would be able to do medium relationship wery well.Though,he is still university study,but he was interested in marketing more than me

correction

Yesterday, after my son got off work, he asked me a qustion about medium relationships. I knew that he would be very good at medium relationships. Though he is still studying at a university, he is more interested in marketing then I was.