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- Primero entrado de cuaderno Hola a todos, estoy nueva a la comunidad de italki. Si puedes leer mi entrado y ofrer correcciones, estaria muy agredecido :) Como yo: Mi nombre es Meghan, soy de los EE.UU. Vivo en Los Angeles con mi esposo, quien es un musico (el toca la guitarra y escrita su propio musica. Conocimos en la Universidad en Wisconsin (tierra de mucho queso delicioso, gente bueno, y tiempos demasiados frios...BRRRR!). Desde quatro anos, movemos a California asi que mi esposo podria estudiar musica mas y trabajar en la gran ciudad de luz, camaras, y accion :). No tenemos ningun ninos, pero quiero adoptar un perrito para ser mi querido nino :D :D :D Muchas gracias a leerlo!December 7, 201860
I have had bad days, but I am OK now.
This week has not been easy for me. I am stressed at my work. Some coworkers don’t like me, because my boss likes my work.
They have some faults, which my boss knows, but I have never complained to my boss about their faults.
They don't like that I work here, I think. They always yell at me when my boss is not around.
There is one person who watches everything, but she is just quiet. One of the people who are unkind to me is her boyfriend.
I don't know how to protect myself.
Today, they put 4 camera at my office. I feel better, I am not scared anymore.
But I think I must still be careful.
Have a nice day !! Fightinghope these edits were helpful! And if this is all true, I am sorry you are going through this and hope things start to improve!
0 votedDecember 7, 20181Could you check my sentences, please?-5
Could you please check my sentences stated below?If there are mistakes, please correct them.
1. The producer of the distinct movie took for spent a long time to refine editing it.
-distinct is a weird word choice here. Not sure what you mean.
2．The play is slated to premiere from next Saturday.
3．It is hard to understand the genealogy of the heasan due to the termiology.
-“heasan” is not a word. Not sure what this sentence means.
4．He was courted convinced by the villain to commt commit a crime.
-Probably more typical to see “the villain convinced him to commit a crime” but both are correct.
5．The prolific writer’s works are imbued with a spirit of love.
-a technically correct sentence, but sounds a little silly.
6．The government is trying to allay their fears about the calamity and the chaotic situation.
-technically correct, but would be better to define “their” ex “the government is trying to allay the people’s fears about the calamity and chaos.”
７．He gave her some adornment under the table to change her mind.
-wow this sounds dirty haha. Adornment is definitely not the right word, but not sure what you were intending to say here.
8．The company gained prominence by unification of subsidiaries.
-technically correct, but not sure of the meaning. Prominence is being well known.
I really appreciate your attention!
Etsuko
Overall, I think using less complex words will aid you in getting your point across. The sentences seem like they are relying on a thesaurus. Hope this was helpful!
0 votedDecember 7, 20182New year's day hiking.
New year's day is nearly approaching. Do you have any plans on new year's day? Our town does new year's day hiking at Mt Yakurai. Mt Yakurai is our city's symbol. It is 533 meters tall. It takes about 1 and a half hours to get to the top of the mountain. It is a small mountain but It is called KAMIFIJI by locals. A part of the name Fuji comes from Mt. Fuji. Also, There is a beautiful garden at the bottom of Mt Yakurai.0 votedDecember 7, 20181- Hola! Si haces clic en tu imagen di tu perfil y entonces haces clic en “settings” (no se la palabra en español, mi perfil es en inglés), desde eso página puedes cambiar tu lenguaje materno y tu lenguaje que quieres aprender. Espero que este ayúdate! (Y lo siento para mi español, estoy practicando...)0 votedDecember 7, 20180
