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    A STORY
    We <strike>have </strike> had been driving for four hours when we saw the sign for a small hotel and decided to stop.
    We had been arguing bitterly for one hour. Unfortunately, at one point on the journey, I <strike>took </strike>made a mistake, I took the wrong road. Before that we had been singing enthusiastically <strike>actually </strike>and the purpose and direction of the trip have been keenly discussed.
    We parked the car gently next to the front door of the hotel, we looked at each other angrily and hardly opened our mouths to say <strike>something </strike>anything. We went in and saw a person at a desk, awfully dressed, with a pale face who help us to check in. Meanwhile, we had been looking around at the spooky decoration, we looked very surprised.
    After that, we were going to our room and suddenly a person come up to us, I realized to my horror that he had no head. he or she or it turn to the left in a corner followed by what we thought who had to be a vampire, accompanied by something similar to the <strike>monster of Frankenstein </strike>Frankensteins monster. At <strike>which </strike>that point we were terrified and decided to follow them downstairs, taking care not to be <strike>watched </strike>seen. We walked along a mysteriously narrow corridor with candles and webs on the wall, and there <strike>was it </strike>it was,” The annual monster convention” , Oh my god! , a big room full of witches, vampires, werewolves and <strike>a</strike> scary kind of monsters. There was a famous actors meeting, tremendously well disguised and representing their roles in a memorable way.
    Obviously, they laughed a lot about us. After an embarrassing moment a zombie kindly introduced us to the others <strike>kindly</strike>, and <strike>finally </strike>in the end it was one of the better nights we had ever had. We enjoyed a lot of terrible dances and having fatal potions until dawn. Terrific!!!!!
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    December 2, 2018
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