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Hello! I am from Australia, but I am currently living in Kanagawa, Japan. I enjoy nature, reading, music, basketball and a little bit of gaming. Since living in Japan, I have been exposed to Japanese daily. But, I still have trouble communicating. I am looking for more opportunities to really learn about the language and to improve my communication.
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    Mid-Autumn Festival

    I must eat mooncakes today. I haven't bought them for a long time. Every Mid-Autumn Festival, my company will give me one box of mooncakes as a gift. It's rainy in my city. Maybe I won't be able to see the moon tonight. Anyway, Happy Mid-Autumn Festival.

    Well done Timy! It is short but it expresses what you want to say. Be a little careful with the verb tenses. Usually, following "must" we would use the simple present of the verb (eat, drink, send, see etc). Following "haven't" we would usually use the past participle of the verb (bought, eaten, drunk, seen etc). When writing in English also remember to add a space after a comma and after a full stop.

    I also edited it a little to make it sound more natural. Overall, well written. Keep it up!
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    September 13, 2019
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