Yes, this works well! You could also say ´Next, I need...´, but this is more a choice of style preference and can depend on how you tell the rest of the story. Hope this helps!

Both words would be possible and correct. The word that you choose would often depend on the situation, as ´insights´ is more formal than ´thoughts´.

Please check my sentences. Today I want to talk about university. Why did I choose Kanagawa University? Because there is the campus in Minatomirai. I like Minatomirai, and we can go to a lot of places around Minatomirai after school. In addition, Kanagawa university is close to my home, so I chose it. Also there are many things I wanted to study, such as different cultures, languages and tourism. I would especially like to study tourism on the tourism culture courses. However, there are universities with high or not so high levels in Japan. Students apply to universities that match their academic ability. There are many ways to apply to universities such as examinations, interviews and so on. Therefore, I think it is not difficult to enter universities. On the other hand, I think it is difficult to graduate from a four-year university course. Japan is strict about attendance so some people lose school credit for this. If this happens, it is difficult to go on to the next grade/year. Overall, I think it is not difficult to enter universities but it is difficult to graduate from a four-year university course.

The ´full information´ part is not very natural. ´More information´, ´all the information´ or ´further infortmation´ would go better here. Overall, this phrase is possible but is very formal, so it will probably only be appropriate in specific situations. Hope this helps!

At this time of year 三里屯西五街 in Beijing becomes a famous place, since at the end of autumn many trees change from green to gold, making the place very beautiful. Today I passed by the park, and I saw some people were taking photos. Although the leaves haven’t turned completely golden yet, the view is already very beautiful.

This is the simple past. However, instead of putting the main verb ´have´ in the past tense (He had a considerable record collection), the ´do´ is added for emphasis and is instead conjugated in the past as it is the first verb to appear in the sentence.

In relations, if you want to be the person who is doing their best to get someone else’s satisfication you will face problems which at first doesn’t appear clearly. Problems are just like snakes, trying to disappear from you untill they find the right way to get you down. So you need to ask and get more details about which one you are. This is something I would call a principle to deal with humans on this tiny planet. : )

Earthquakes are common in Japan. Many Japanese people carry emergency bags. The bag contains a change of clothes, medicine, identification, batteries, water and food, etc. We put the bag near our bed or near the entrance. In times of danger, we evacuate with that bag. I hope that I don't need to use this bag. 地震はこわいです( ´ω`)