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Hi,
saya rasa ‘takle’ yang awak maksudkan dieja sebetulnya ialah ‘tackle’- ya, sama dengan perkataan dalam bahasa Inggeris yang digunakan apabila cuba menyelesaikan sesuatu masalah. Dalam hal ini, ‘tackle’ digunakan untuk mencuba untuk ‘mengorat’ (flirt) seorang wanita/lelaki.
‘Takle’ pula mungkin singkatan untuk ‘tak boleh’, yang bermaksud CANNOT. Contohnya, Susan ‘takle’ gi sekolah hari ini (meaning, Susan CANNOT go to school today)
Tapi saya perlu ingatkan bahawa perkataan ini sangat-sangat informal, dan lebih kepada slang/ bahasa jalanan kalau anda menggunakannya di Malaysia.
0 votedOctober 5, 20181Title : I love to watch movies
If Someone ask me what are you usually doing during a rest time, (someone asks me about what I usually do during my leisure time)* I will say that I love to watch movies.
I really love to watch movies, especially American films. and I also love to make a comment (comments- I am sure you make comments several times rather than just once?)about my feeling on the Letterbox, which is website, (a website) after watching them.
There are some problem (problems) with making up a sentence associated with a movie I watched, though, This (this) work make (makes) me feel great!
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------*using REST time in your sentence is perfectly understandable, but it will be more common to put 'leisure' instead of 'rest'
0 votedOctober 2, 20182My favorite cartoon
In childhood my favorite cartoon was Tom & Jerry. Every day I wanted to watch this cartoon. There were two main characters cat and mouse .(there are two ways to put this- either separate with a coma like this: , a cat and a mouse. OR place the word 'which', like this: which were a cat and a mouse.) It is about funny events happening with cat and mouse. (between the cat and the mouse).I watch (watched) this cartoon because it’s (it was) funny and i had fun. Also, my favorite cartoon character is Doraemon. I think everybody knows what it is. It is a blue robot cat with no ears. But now i sow some of this cartoon (I only get to watch this cartoon) when i have a (don't put 'a' before time- time is uncountable) free time.0 votedOctober 2, 20180My trip to Sardinia
This summer I went on holiday (a vacation) with my family to Sardinia,one of the two biggest islands of italy (Italy).
We went there for 10 days and I visited the smeralda (Smeralda) coast, (which is)famous in all over the Europe (maybe the world) for the beautiful sea and sun.
We visited a different beach every day and every beach was beautiful and different from the others but they all were full of tourists from all over the world.
There were a lot of rich people there with their yachts especially in porto cervo (Porto Cervo), a small city where a coffee costs 5 euros!!
One day We (we) visited caprera (Caprera), a (an) uninhabited island near sardinia (Sardinia)and WeWe tasted what means living alone without anyone can help you. (we were able to experience what it tastes like to live alone without anyone to help you.)
I really enjoyed the trip to sardinia (Sardinia)and I hope I'll go back there one day visiting places that I didn't visit during my first holiday there.0 votedOctober 1, 20182Krakow
We arrived in Krakow on Friday after a long tiring journey by car. It took us ages to get from Hrachovo to the Polish border! We’re having a great time now though. We’re staying in a (an) old spacious apartment in the city center. Easy to get anywhere from here just by walking!
The weather is sunny but not too hot. I’d say it’s a little bit colder (here) than in Slovakia.
We haven’t done much yet but we’ve visited the market on the main square. I’ve bought some postcard for my friends but I’m not going to post them in (while I am still in) Poland.
Tomorrow we are going to the Jewish District. Heard the synagogues are impressive.
My dad has made plan(s) that we are going to a salt mine on Monday. I’m not very keen on that idea but we’ll see.
Anyway, It’s been a terrific holiday! Krakow is simply a gorgeous place! Wish you could be here!NB- Overall your essay is almost perfect! Good use of English grammar and words :) However I would avoid using so many contractions ( eg I’ve, we’ve, it’s) if this is an essay for homeworks or formal use, but you could get away with it if you’re using them to write a letter for a paypal for example.
0 votedOctober 1, 20181One Day Of The Childhood
There was a friend of mine named Vlad. When he and I were 12, we often met in a village because we both went there every summer. There were also many kids living in the village, who were 9 to 11 of age at the moment. Especially, I want to present you two very sly and naughty girls. (In this particular story, I would like to talk about two very cunning and naughty girls)
Those girls got along well with my brother (who also went to the village every summer) and his grandma grandmother named Yulya because she and girls' one were friends (I'm not sure I fully understand this relationship, but I'm assuming Yulya, which is your grandmother were also friends with these girls?Correct sentence would be- because she was once friends with the girls). Those girls and the(my) brother didn't have a blast whenever (cool phrase to use but very informal, better to say did not always have a good time together) but they weren't enemies to each other, either.
Vlad can't stand my brother's grandma (again informal, use grandmother instead). I understood him: she loved no one, always spoke very loud (loudly), were (was) angry and cold. He also hated those two girls because they always looked ( were always looking) for a moment to make a fool of him. Nobody knew their reason to do that, maybe they just didn't like him. However, they rarely made peace with each other and then played games outside.
One day Vlad told everyone in our community "Raise your hand if you don't like Yulya". All (Everyone) suddenly fell silent and looked at him with eyes full of contempt. Anyway, a few seconds later they kept playing but Vlad didn't even suspect what would wait for (expect what was awaiting) him next day.
Next day (On the next day) Yulya found out what Vlad said about her. The girls just tattled her. Fortunately, everyone forgot about that incident quickly.0 votedOctober 1, 20184
