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    Aprendiendo español Hola! Soy una estudiante en una universidad cerca de mi casa. Estoy estudiando biología porque quiero ser una doctora en el futuro. También quiero un énfasis en español. Estoy en el medio del énfasis, y estoy tomando una clase sobre Iberia medieval y las tres culturas y religiones en España. Puedo entender la mayoría de lo que mi profesora dice, pero no puedo hablar muy bien. Cuando escribo reportes y trabajos, uso un diccionario mucho y tengo mucho miedo cuando necesito hablar en clase. No sé cómo hablar mejor, y aprender los tiempos verbales (tenses?) difíciles como el subjuntivo. Hay un gran diferencia entre lo que entiendo y lo que digo, y estoy empezado a siento un poco frustrado sobre esto. Tienes algunas ideas para ayudarme?
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    My first day in my university

    In June 2017 I graduated from my school, passed all of the National State Exams that I needed for admission into university and entered the university which I am in now. My first day in my university was the first of September 2017. It was day about orientation and acquaintance with rules, schedule and other essential stuff. I believe, it was an important day in my life, because I met my future classmates. [1] I understood that they tried to seem more smart and talkative, than they were. I also saw the building in which I study now. I am sure that first impressions can be deceptive, because you want everything fit your expectations.
    After the first few weeks, I got used to going to my university, attending classes and talking with new people; it became familiar. So now I am a sophomore and my perception of my classmates and lecturers has changed a lot, but I continue to study and do stuff which is important for me (develop my language skills, for instance).

    [1] Better: My classmates were trying to act like they were more smart and talkative than they really were.

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    Fourth Week In the US

    Many days have passed since I wrote my last notebook entry. I've had a bunch of problems with my new housing and with my activity in the university. However, gradually things became better.  (You can also say "things got better.").

    I've been in the US for three weeks or so. I got the impression that my language became worse, because I used the same words and only several contractions daily. Then I noticed that on the other hand, it became much better, because I started speaking faster and confidently. There's just no time to study it in the way I did it being in Russia.

    However, I push myself to do it, especially these days, when Hurricane Florence makes fun of us.* Classes were cancelled and people were evacuated, although the hurricane went other way, probably to South Carolina mostly. The sky is dark and it rains but it's far from our expectations from a few days before. I heard that officials renamed the hurricane to a subtropical storm. I'm a little bit disappointed, although it's better for everyone.

    Students are pretty weak. I was shocked first, but then realized the local structure of the educational process. The guys also got used to me. It seems that our work might be very interesting and challenging. A smooth sea never makes a skillful sailor.


    This journal entry was written very well. Any native English speaker would be able to follow along with your thoughts and understand what you mean. The only part that is a little bit confusing is when you say "Hurricane Florence makes fun of us." I understand what you mean, but in English we would typically say "Hurricane Florence mocks us with _________." For example, Hurricane Florence mocks us with winds strong enough to destroy trees and houses." You also need slightly more information when you say "Students are pretty weak." Do you mean that they are intellectually weak? That they are physically unable to lift much weight? Overall, you have done great work here, and your English is very, very good!

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