NEF 5 Letter

Dear Madam.
My name is Grisha. I am 29 years old and live in Novomoskovsk. I am interested in strategic management because (I) want to improve my management skills. I also want to get a promotion.
I have looked at your website but there is no information about subjects which (which subjects) are included in the educational programme. I would be grateful if you would send me the educational programme.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully.

Fantastic letter! Do you know it is a woman you are writing to? If you don't know for sure you can write 'Dear Sir or Madam.' I hope you get the information you want. Good luck!

Famous person

There are many famous people with whom I would like to have dinner. One of them is Freddie Mercury. I am fascinating about (fascinated* by)  his voice, his talent and his music. He died 2 years before my birth, but for me he is still alive in his great songs. At the first time I have listened (I listened to) his song «Princes of the Universe» (was) in the serial (series) “Highlander”.
I think we would (I would like to / I think we can) talk about music, about what he meant when he was writing his “Bohemian rhapsody”.

*Adjectives that end in -ing (exciting, interesting...) are used to describe the OBJECTS WHICH MAKE YOU FEEL. If you want to talk about HOW YOU FEEL we always use the adjectives which end in -ed (excited, interested...)
For example 'I am excited about going to a concert' or 'This film is very exciting.

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Great writing passage! I love Freddie Mercury and Queen, too. You did a fantastic job of describing why you would like to have dinner with him. Keep up the good work!