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    Getting cold chest on weekend

    Last weekend I got a cold chest. Today at work I felt bad, I had body aches and I took some pills to feel better and finish my work. Yesterday I felt good, but I think I got a chest cold on the weekend due to the rain on Saturday. Here, it was raining a lot and the weather is cold when rains but it was warm when it stopped raining. So now I must bring my umbrella around all day. I will have to wear my sweater and take some medicine to overcome the body aches so I can go to work.


    Try using more commas and periods to make sure the sentences are not too long.

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    September 12, 2018
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    Morning routine

    When the alarm goes off at 7 AM sharp, I get up and go to the bathroom. First, I wash my face and brush my teeth, then I shave and wash my face. After that, I put on some lotion and do some morning stretching. Finally I get dressed and go to work. It's a brand new day!


    Just a few adjustments to make it sound more natural, most English speakers rarely use (o'clock). Also it would be more natural to say you "wash" your face rather than "rinse" your face

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    September 12, 2018
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    It would be better to write An English Learner's Blog (If you are only referencing your learning journey through the blog, a better option if the blog is more personal) OR English Learner's Blog (If the site is meant only as a resource for English learners),
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    September 12, 2018
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