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你先把每个词把握清楚意思。然后试着造句。我可以帮你改。但不想帮你做作业哈哈
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我想去北京,上海和大连。在北京时我想去参观名胜古迹,还想品尝北京烤鸭和麻婆豆腐。对于上海的古城和海滨区还有我很好奇。我想尝试城市的铁路。还有参观大连1904-1905俄日战争遗迹。另外我希望可以参观张家界国家森林公园。
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你的思路太乱,不清晰。用词重复太多。我想你可以用你母语写然后一句一句的翻译。那样思路会清楚些。
加油!
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